Because of the factual nature of this paper and extensive references, this paper is a great research tool.The grammatical quality of this paper is up to the author's usual snuff also.Good Job.
- 26/05/2005
- 20:34:16
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is in the usual grammatical style of the author. Good flow and informative. Sticks to solid points and doesn't ramble. Concise and informative. Recommended as a research tool for other users.
- 26/05/2005
- 20:30:02
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a descriptive and informative analysis. I don't know that I would eat it, but I would definitely use it as a research tool. Accurate and a fun read.Great Job.
- 26/05/2005
- 14:07:33
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The grammatical structure of this essay is excellent. It flows smoothly from point to point and is descriptive and informative. This is a great summary of huge social issue. Excellent research material for other users.
- 26/05/2005
- 14:02:41
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a great research piece. Users looking for something on the topic of Madam Rolands will find this quite helpful and an interesting read.Good Job.
- 26/05/2005
- 13:58:53
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
As a musician I find this paper one of the most refreshing reads on cheathouse. It is satisfactorily descriptive and for those who enjoy the Beatles, raises a slight sense of nostalgia and a smile.Great Job.
- 26/05/2005
- 13:56:17
- Score: 5 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Satisfactory piece on Michael Jackson's life. MccaddenSucks is right, more of a bio than essay. Overall, well written, detailed and informative.Fair Job.
- 11/05/2004
- 14:42:31
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Not exactly an essay but certainly passes for a good editorial. The author does a pretty good job of exressing opinion clearly.
- 11/05/2004
- 14:38:31
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Why can't people get it through their heads??? These are notes not essays, and along the guidelines for quality notes, these are top notch.These notes, as all of ccmustangs2001's notes, are informative, detailed, thorough and well written. They provide a great resource for research and studying.How is they say?..."Keep on truckin'", ccmustangs2001.
- 04/05/2004
- 13:49:43
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I must commend you ccmustangs2001 on your valuable contributions to cheathouse.comYour notes are always informative, detailed, thorough and well written.Keep up the good work.
- 04/05/2004
- 13:46:49
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Anybody who rates these notes negatively is off their rocker.This isn't supposed to be an essay people, this is a set of notes, and they are quite thorough and informative which means that they are valuable research and study tools. I do believe that is what cheathouse was created for. To assist students with research and studying and these notes are quite beneficial.Don't be disheartened ccmustangs2001, good job.
- 04/05/2004
- 13:43:00
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Once again, informative, detailed and thorough. ccmustangs2001, you have definitely made valuable contributions to cheathouse with your well written notes which are excellent research and study tools. I don't know WHY someone would give these notes a negative rating!!!Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 04/05/2004
- 13:40:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
These notes are informative, detailed and thorough. Well written and is a good research or study item.Good Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 04/05/2004
- 13:37:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This piece is quite an interesting read as it is full of details, thorough and is written on an entertaining subject.I find this piece to be insightful and entertaining.Not too bad, ssparks1170.
- 03/05/2004
- 15:24:03
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
While at times this piece is choppy and monotonous, it is evident that the author did put forth an effort. The grammatical quality of this paper is pretty solid but the fundamental quality could use a boost.If the author wishes to increase the quality of writing than I would recommend using outlines and writing around three or four rough drafts.Overall though this piece is interesting to read, though not always politically correct. With it's details and great reference list, this piece is a valuable research tool.Good Job, ravingangel2501.
- 03/05/2004
- 15:13:57
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is quite a persuasive piece. It is well strucutured, thoroughly thought out and skillfully presented. It is insightful, full of details and the author makes a convincing and intelligent case for lowering the drinking age in the United States.Keep up the good work, Jwp1534.
- 03/05/2004
- 15:07:36
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is one of the better pieces on cheathouse.com on it's respective suject. Very well written, well structured, very detailed and informative. It is quite insightful and interesting to read. It is also useful as a research item.Great Job, BlinkTS69.
- 03/05/2004
- 15:02:53
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an insightful piece. There is room for improvement grammatically, especially on smoothing out the transitions and expressing ideas thoroughly and clearly. Overall, though, this is an informative piece that is interesting to read and thought provoking.Good Job.
- 03/05/2004
- 14:58:44
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Yes, people should look at the past "critically" and learn from the mistakes recorded by history. No, people shouldn't disrespect the previous generation or the United States. The past generation was human, this one is and so will the next one be.Humanity as a whole has to work on improving itself. All in all, that is happening, but with opinions as abundant as the population of our world, we are not always progressing in harmony. One of the biggest issues is with people who agree with Machiavelli in that "the end justifies the means"...many a great man followed that creed to somewhat a degree. Winston Churchill and Roosevelt to name a couple. Than there are the troubles of through nationality, whence we get the saying "one man's ist is another man's freedom fighter"...The human mind and heart isn't constrained by any laws or rules such as science. That is why psychology is a pseudoscience, and will always have a degree of unpredictability.Grammatically there is room for improvement in this piece, especially between transition of thought. I would recommend the use of an outline to the author, in order to empower him/her to express personal philosophy in a much clearer way.
- 03/05/2004
- 00:46:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The author did a medoicre job of analyzing the individual needs and comparing them to eachother, though for two topics that are vital to humans it is like comparing apples and oranges.Room for improvment in the grammaticall struture but overall a decent piece.
- 03/05/2004
- 00:34:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Thorough, detailed, well structured, flows smoothly and obviously well researched.I have read somewhat on this topic and found this piece to be quite insightful. It makes for a great read or helpful research item.Good Job, sherrydgreen.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:59:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You call this a fun survey? I have never seen anyone get their freak on over a survey like this, but oh well, to each his own.Not exactly a literary masterpiece and I can't exactly figure out how this piece could be potentially useful.Poor Job.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:56:51
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This is a great start but there is definitely room for expansion in the areas of detail, thoroughness, and grammatical structure. The author is full of great ideas and perhaps could try using outlines to convey those ideas more clearly and skillfully.Overall, average rating.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:53:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a brief and concise summary of the short story, "Araby" by James Joyce. It has great references and is informative.There is room for expansion by being more thorough and detailed. Using outlines has always been a help to authors. Overall an average paper.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:49:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Though at times this piece is choppy, I agree with the authors philosophy. This piece is full of great ideas but needs to be re-organized. I would strongly recommend using outlines when you write, stay_true, they should boost the quality of your writing.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:46:30
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
The author uses concise language to keep this piece brief and informative. It is well written and informative.Good Job.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:40:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent piece. It is very detailed, thorough and obviously researched. It is also well structured and well written. It transitions from one point to the next quite smoothly.This is an excellent topic and because of the great detail this piece is entertaining to read. It seems that this topic is important to the author and I applaud this piece as an excellent work.
- 02/05/2004
- 22:10:29
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is one of the best pieces that I have read on this site. It is on a topic that will forever be in the hearts of those with compassion. It is thorough, detailed and well researched.great read and excellent research item.Excellent Job.
- 02/05/2004
- 20:41:55
- Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a great paper. It is detailed, thorough and obviously well researched. Makes for a great read and strong research item.Well written on a great topic.Good Job, Joekilty.
- 02/05/2004
- 20:32:04
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
johnjjp: The odds of so many people submitting their work twice at the same time are quite heavy...perhaps it is a glitch in the system, hmmm?therealhris: This piece a job well done...It is detailed, thorough, flows smoothly and is an interesting read, good job.
- 02/05/2004
- 09:24:55
- Score: 0 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
No, MAD1, there is no way YOU can delete them, but most likely the cheathouse admin will only accept one therefore you won't have to worry about the other two...As for the actual piece, well, like it's twin, it is informative, well written, thorough and detailed.Definitely a researchers tool.Good Job.
- 02/05/2004
- 09:21:48
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is quite the informative piece...It is thorough, detailed, well structured and once again, very informative.Witht it's list of references adding to it's quality, this piece is definitely a good research tool...
- 02/05/2004
- 09:15:13
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
What is actually written in this piece is informative, detailed, well structured and employs a concise vocabulary. Yet the title confused me slightly when I fist started reading because it(title) implies that this is about Darwin, and if johnjjp and I aren't mistaken, this seems to be rather about "To Kill a Mockingbird"...hmmmNonetheless, well done paper but next time be more careful in selecting your title...
- 01/05/2004
- 09:38:51
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I second glengem's and johnjjp's sentiments. I would like to make a suggestion as how you can improve. First off you have great ideas, which is the most important thing for a writer, but you weren't organized that well. At times this piece was choppy and that only added to the negative fact of a "single paragraph" form.I strongly recommend using an extensive outline in your future writing and also writing first and second rough drafts. If I'm not mistaken this was your first attempt on this piece and you settled on that. For a high school senior, you should know better by now.
- 01/05/2004
- 09:34:51
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You've come up with great ideas, unfortunately you haven't adequately delved into the depth and symbolism. Also, the "single paragraph" form can have a very negative effect on readers. Perhaps using an outline would be of some assistance to you...Otherwise than that, this is a piece that the author obviously put effort into, as johnjjp has stated.
- 01/05/2004
- 09:29:42
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Paragraphs would definitely add to the quality of this piece. Also, while it is informative and detailed in the information provided, this piece is quite brief compared to other works that I have read on the same topic.Extensive practice with and/or use of outline's would add greatly to you writing capabilities, rostame2.
- 01/05/2004
- 02:35:57
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
What is written in this piece is useful and informative but if johnjjp is accurate in his comment than I wholeheartedly echo his sentiments.
- 01/05/2004
- 02:32:13
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This piece is a well written bio on Kazan's life. While it is somewhat brief it is written in a manner that allows it to be concise and informative simeltaneously. Seems to be thorough and detailed to a satisfactory point.Well Done.
- 01/05/2004
- 02:29:09
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Ahh, the Space Race. That was the race of the century, hmhmhm.Syphorix, I am truely impressed. This is quite the informative piece and your choice of vocabulary makes it not only a thorough and detailed work but an interesting on to read at that.Great Work, Syphorix.
- 01/05/2004
- 02:26:05
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
As your last piece on Nuclear Energy, Syphorix, this is well done.This piece is thorough, informative, detailed, comprehensive, well researched and well written.This piece makes for an excellent research tool.Great Job, Syphorix.
- 01/05/2004
- 02:22:12
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Wow, I don't believe I have ever managed a paragraph of 7,800+ words. You have outdone yourself, my fine literary colleague.Overall this piece is quite informative, obviously well researched, evidently well detailed, comprehensive and thorough. If one can stand the "single paragraph" form than this is a most useful piece as a research tool.
- 01/05/2004
- 02:19:12
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Slightly choppy at times, perhaps an outline could be of assistance to the author. Otherwise than that, it is well written on a great topic. It is detailed, informative and thorough. This subject seems to be close to the author and this piece turned out to be a pretty good one.Good Job, momo18.
- 01/05/2004
- 01:33:35
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I cannot comment on the technical accuracy of this piece as I have never read this short story, but I can say that grammatically this piece is pretty sound. It flows well, is informative and detailed. Seems to be long enough for a short story report, in light of MccaddenSuck's comment, perhaps using an outline would be of great assistance.Overall though, good job.
- 01/05/2004
- 01:29:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I get the feeling that this is topic is a matter of importance to the author. jstupl structured this piece well. It is well written, informative, detailed and interesting to read.The battle between Religion and Evolution(Science) is an age old battle. The unfortunate fact that may don't realize is that a large part of the Bible is quite scientific and medical. A surprising number of scientific and medical facts that are common knowledge today that were unknown before would have been common knowledge earlier if people (scientists) had paid attention to the Bible. The strife goes from the Vatican vs. the Illuminati to Creationism vs. Evolutionism.I say that all people need to look at the situation objectively and come to informed, personal decisions and than lead your life based upon that.
- 01/05/2004
- 01:25:38
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Excellent work...this piece is not only solid grammatically but it is written on a subject that is important to most and therefore can at times be quite delicate. The author structured this piece well and expressed thoughts clearly.Job Well Done.
- 01/05/2004
- 01:18:22
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This world can be so messed up. First women complain that they are not being treated equally and everywhere I turn I am always faced with it. My mom is a feminist, my mom's friends are feminists, seems almost every I've dated is a feminist and my current friend is a feminist. OKAY...I agree women should have equal rights because I believe that they contribute equally to society, but equal rights are not special rights. If women feel that they have a lot of societal pressures, welcome to the world of men. Wait, didn't you ask to be treated fairly? Than what is there to complain about? If you want equality than go through what men have to go through and respond to those pressures in the same manner. Wait, but men can't go through child labor and experience that...soooo....maybe that means that perfect equilibrium is not exactly a possibility and perhaps men and women have two distinct roles to play in society and they should accept that and make life a little easier for themselves and everone else. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying that women shouldn't have careers, it should be a choice of that individual, but if you make that choice, take the consequeces like a man. Ooops...see what I mean?
- 01/05/2004
- 01:13:44
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Well, who wants to see a pop star with with acne and a bad hair day? By the way they do have to deal with that, but they have deep pockets to deal with it. Nevertheless, people have this perception of celebrities as bigger than life persona and everything must be in perfection. If seeing our normal problems on a pop star were so acceptable than why would Britney Spears' or Christina Aguilera's cd sales plummet if they gained 50lbs., got huge breakouts of horribe acne and their hair looked like a porcupine's quills after being electrocuted? You know that would happen, yet you whine about celebrities being exactly what we expect of them.
- 01/05/2004
- 01:04:32
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It is fortunate for society, at least in the Unites States of America, that women are gaining equality. The author concludes by talking about "the dangers of women's dependence on male interpretations of their needs". That is definitely not the case today and you have to give the men of that era credit for at least trying to "interpret", because their lifestyles were much different then.
- 01/05/2004
- 00:57:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a great piece. It is informative and fun to read. It flows well, evidently is researched well, has great detail and seems to be pretty thorough. It is well structured and employs a good calibre of vocabulary.Good Job.
- 01/05/2004
- 00:52:38
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
If Satanism has been blown out of proportion or misconstrued by traditional religion, than there must have been a cause for it. Also, the overwhelming majority of serial criminals whether it be , , or anything else, are Satanists. Especially in most of the notorious cases of extreme or . So if the majority of people say that it is harmful and the majority of weirdos are into it, well????......
- 01/05/2004
- 00:49:23
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
There is definitely a lot more that could be said about this subject as it quite a controversy. All I can say is this, unlike most other , is foudn naturally in plants...and doesn't have to be altered in order to have the effect it's users or abusers, which ever way you look at it, want it to.The ironic part is that so many people use , that trying to enforce prevention laws is reaching the point of such futility that it isn't even funny.
- 01/05/2004
- 00:44:51
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Quite the informative piece. Not only is it detailed, thorough and well researched but it is grammatically well structured and well written. It flows smoothly and the authors efforts paid off with piece that is well rounded grammatically, technically and fundamentally.If anyone finds something missing, the references included are quite thorough. This piece is an excellent research item.Great Job, pepham.
- 30/04/2004
- 16:03:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
These notes are thorough, detailed and smoothly written. Informative and concise, this piece definitely has value as a research tool.Excellent Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:58:25
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I'll take whatever she's smokin'...hmhmhm...j/k.This IS depressing, but nevertheless, quite creative. The author does an unusually "intimate" job of delving into the "mind" of the beholder.Well done, MccaddenSucks.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:56:05
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This is some radical stuff. On the gloomy side, as it were, but in a good way because it makes you think. We all know that the world is the nicest of places, so if anybody finds this a bad piece than all I can say is this: The truth hurts.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:50:27
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Pieces that are written with the authors are always in a calibre of their own. Not only is this piece a great read but it is also grammatically well structured and flows smoothly. This piece also has great detail and great creativity.Great Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:46:58
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Excellent analysis of group vs. individual decision makers. Very thorough and detailed. It is evident that the author put forth a good effort into writing this piece and it has paid off. This piece is informative, interesting to read, well structured and well organized.Great addition with the references, they add to the value of this piece as a research tool.Great Job, rolfeman02.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:38:27
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I find that "short essays" and ripped papers are at least contain information and are contributing to a database. Submitting the same piece more than once is just y lame.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:28:59
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is a detailed and thorough analysis of the poem "To Autumn". Well structured and well written on a great poet.I echo johnjjp's sentiments on the early of Keats.Great Job, deepesh.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:05:29
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The concise vocabulary used by the author makes this piece brief and informative. Well structured, keeping the readers attention and flowing smoothly. Majority of author who write on "To Kill a Mockingbird" do not mention or do not go into detail on Atticus. This evidences that rebel123 definitely read the book and took an interest in it.Good Job, rebel123.
- 30/04/2004
- 15:01:04
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The grammaticall structure of this piece is quite good and it flows smoothly, but I agree with johnjjp, it needs much more detail and length.Good Start, hypakilla.
- 30/04/2004
- 14:55:45
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty good piece. Perhaps one of the best parts is that it stays focused on the title and therefore is thorough, informative and detailed.I actually would have liked to have read more based soley upon the fact that the author was on the ball and the choice of vocabulary makes this piece an interesting read.
- 30/04/2004
- 14:52:22
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
PLEASE!!!299 words is one paragraph NOT an essay. manatgametalk, you have great ideas and it is evident that you either did a good job of researching and brainstorming or are familiar with the topic, but you need to re-write this piece using an outline because you have crammed a lot of good ideas into one paragraph and they need to be expounded upon so that this paper is much longer and provides a greater amount of information. That will give it much more depth and information because as it stands, this is just a paragraph.
- 30/04/2004
- 14:48:40
- Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty good piece. Well written, great reminiscent touch...and it is quite informative. Good research tool and a great read.Well done, crater.
- 30/04/2004
- 14:05:22
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good stuff. Nice and "radical"...it is about time that people, especially men, started showing the female race more respect. Unfortunately the habit of disrespect towards women is an age old habit and cannot be stopped overnight and it doesn't help that more than half the women and s I know disrespect themselves.There are a few rough spots in this piece, grammatically. Overall though, it is well written and because of the references cited this is a great tool for research.
- 30/04/2004
- 14:01:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty comprehensive overview of Punk rock. Valuable information of research and good personal opinions.Flows smoothly, well structured and interesting to read.Good Job, volcomwhore.
- 30/04/2004
- 13:53:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
These are some pretty darn meticulous notes. The majority of ccmustangs2001 "notes" read almost like decent "essays"...so it goes without saying that these are quite informative and a splendid research resource.Excellent Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 16:47:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Insightful, informative, detailed, flows smoothly and is well structured. A great research resource.Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 16:44:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Thorough, informative and detailed.Definitely a help for research.Good Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 16:39:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I must commend you ccmustangs2001...You have made a quite a valuable contribution to cheathouse.com with your collection of study notes...not only are the notes quite informative but the topic are quite common, especially in the classroom and therefore even more useful than on a more obscure or specialized subject.These specific notes are thorough, informative, detailed and make a for an excellent research resource.Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 16:32:38
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Thorough, informative, detailed, well structured, flows smoothly and even interesting to read.These notes are definitely a valuable resource for research since they are of such great calibre and on a common classroom topic.Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 16:21:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You seem to have a gift for taking dubious notes, ccmustangs2001. These notes are quite thorough, very detailed, flow smoothly and are very informative. This can definintely be used as a research tool, this and any of ccmustangs2001's other notes.Excellent job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 16:18:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While this is slightly short, and I say that because I found this piece interesting and wanted to read more, it does contain great information. It seems that the author takes this subject personally and this would make a good editorial. This piece is well structured, flows smoothly and is detailed.Once again...the only thing that I could criticize is the shortness because this is definitely worth reading.Good Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 29/04/2004
- 15:08:33
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an exciting read. It is well structured, consistently uses good vocabulary and flows pretty well. This piece has great narratives, details and it is obvious that the author put forth a good effort.Great Job, MollyBee9184.
- 29/04/2004
- 08:48:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The author put forth a pretty good effort on this piece...but Christianity did not come out of Catholicism but, rather was preserved by it through the Dark AGes..if you recall, Christianity was started by Jesus Christ around 33A.D., upon his . The church than went through multiple persecutions and trials..but it was preserved by the perseverance of it's believers...since all the origianl works were written in Latin...than during the Dark Ages when the only educated people were the priests, they distorted Christianity...but still preserved it for the likes of Martin Luther and John Wycliffe and such to start revealing the exact truth to the common people...So Christianity did not come out of Catholicism, but rather, was preserved by it...and I don't think that Catholics would appreciate being regarded to as non-Christian...Religion is one of my strong suits...
- 28/04/2004
- 21:22:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This piece is well researched, well written and is interesting to read. The author picked a great topic and clearly explained the situation from his/her point of view. Flows smoothly and seems to be thorough...Good Job, ellyjean.
- 28/04/2004
- 21:07:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Homosexuality is NOT accepted or condoned by the Vatican and any church that adheres to the principles set forth in traditional Catholicism. Anybody who says that the Catholic church accepts homosexuality is either telling a bold faced lie, misguided, or part of a new sect of the Catholic religion.Homosexuality is NOT biological...homosexuality stems from people who were not raised in a solid moral setting, or refused to continue living in one...and therefore a byproduct of that is ual promiscuity...and wanting to have ual relations with as many people as possible...Let's put it this way...I'm not Catholic, but I am positive that the Pope wouldn' appreciate your sentiments...
- 28/04/2004
- 21:03:59
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The title seems a bit misplaced. Are you saying that Catholics aren't Christians? During the Crusades, the Crusaders were regarded as Christians...and the Roman Catholic church regarded itself as Christian...at least during the Medieval Age...has that changed?
- 28/04/2004
- 20:58:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While the personal interest in the chosen topic is obviously important to the author there is room for improvement with the expansion of ideas and the vocabulary. Overall this piece is actually a decent read about a personal experience.Average Job.
- 28/04/2004
- 20:49:15
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very good job of "compare and contrast"...the author has written a piece that is informative, insightful, full of solid fact and opinion, detailed while maintaining focus on the specific topic. This is a well structured piece and it definitely is a good research tool.Great Job, AEK.
- 28/04/2004
- 15:17:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a very interesting piece to read. Not only is it entertaining to read but it is also informative. It is well structured, flows smoothly, great topic and is full of detail. This is definitely a good research item.great job, rupps98.
- 28/04/2004
- 15:12:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent piece. The author does a good job of "compare and contrast", while also maintaing the integrity of the structure and using good vocabulary. This piece flows well and is interesting to read.Great work, morgrum.
- 28/04/2004
- 15:10:06
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an excellent analysis. It is in-depth, detailed, thorough, informative and well written. The did a good job of structuring this piece and clearly presenting opinion.Good Job, jspearmint.
- 28/04/2004
- 15:06:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
For a ninth grader, this piece is outstanding. The structure is pretty good and the creativity is excellent along with good narratives. This piece is an interesting read and I give the author A+ for effort.Good Job, disas.
- 28/04/2004
- 14:58:07
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Yet again, informative, thorough, detailed and concise. Strong research item as it provides excellent information on a common classroom topic.Great work, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:22:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You are certainly providing cheathouse.com with a commendable batch of notes, ccmustangs2001.Well written, very thorough and detailed making for an excellent research tool.Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:20:15
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Another set of great notes that are detailed, thorough, easy to read and very informative. With a few minor improvement this these notes would read like a decent essay. A great contribution considering that this topic is quite common in the classroom.Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:17:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You will definitely have to make it much longer and more thorough by filling in details and improving grammar. For a first rough draft though, this is quite a good starting point on a great topic and I'm sure that in light of other productions by the author, this piece in it's finished form will be quite informative and make a good read.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:15:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great topic from quite a controversial and interesting period of world history. Flows smoothly, is interesting to read, obviously well researched and well presented. Makes for a great read and even an editorial piece.Good work, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:10:07
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Once again, another set of thorough adn well written study notes by ccmustangs2001. These are quite helpful as they are written on a common classroom topic.Great work, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:04:02
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
These study notes are quite thorough and clearly written making them easy to understand and read, informative and a great research tool...Excellent work, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 13:02:00
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
While be concise and informative this piece is also well written, well thoughtout and interesting to read.Great topic and clearcut presentation of fact and opinion.Good Work, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:58:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is great piece of work on a great topic. It is solid technically, grammatically and fundamentally. The author once again employs concise vocabulary to make this piece brief and informative. Interesting to read.Good Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:53:49
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an informative piece on a topic that is not only popular with teachers but with historians as well. It seems slightly short but the author compensates with concise vocabulary that makes this piece brief and informative. It is interesting to read and is a great research tool...Good Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:50:25
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
While there is slight room for improvement with the structure of this piece...It is overall well-written and well-researched. It flows smoothly, interesting to read and provides information on a great and somewhat popular topic making this piece a great research item...Great Work, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:45:17
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Once again another great creative production by ccmustangs2001. Has all the trademarks of the authors structure, excellent concise plot and good narratives.Excellent Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:38:09
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Once again another creative piece by ccmustangs2001 that flows well with great structure, excellent ideas, interesting narratives and a concise style of writing.Well-done, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:31:18
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This piece is extremely well written. It doesn't bore the reader by droning on about one thing or another yet provides great detail in concise yet suspenseful word choice. The narration is of excellent quality, keeping focus on the specific scene throughout the entire time while constantly building the momentum. The counting throughout the story is one of the biggest contributors to the sense of urgency and you gave great detail of minor that things that really would have happened in such a situation.Evidenced by this piece and other creative pieces that you have written, ccmustangs2001, you have a gift for creative writing and need to make sure that you use it...Excellent Job...
- 28/04/2004
- 12:28:34
- Score: 23 out of 29 people found this comment useful.
To VolcomStud: It is obvious that this isn't an essay but a creative piece.To ccmustangs2001: There is room for improvement with the structure and flow of narratives, but overall the creativity and content in this piece not only make it enjoyable to read but also helpful for to someone looking for ideas for their own creative works.Commendable Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:18:58
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is not only informative and well-written but it flows smoothly, is interesting to read and provides references. The combination of these qualities makes the an outstanding piece of work. Also, this piece provides enough in-depth analysis that it makes for a good research item.Great Job, ccmustangs2001.
- 28/04/2004
- 12:15:21
- Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Detail, thoroughness and in-depth analysis makes this a fine piece of work. This piece is sound grammatically, technically and fundamentally. It flows well and has a comfortable lilt in it's narrations.Good Job, johnjjp.
- 28/04/2004
- 02:53:26
- Score: 43 out of 52 people found this comment useful.
Once again a piece by johnjjp that is interesting to read, well-structured and well-presented.Good work, johnjjp.
- 28/04/2004
- 02:49:17
- Score: 38 out of 42 people found this comment useful.
This piece is well-structured, well-written and provides good information. It flows smoothly and it's details coupled with classic narrations make it interesting to read.Good Job, johnjjp.
- 28/04/2004
- 02:46:34
- Score: 67 out of 72 people found this comment useful.
I agree with ccmustangs2001 that citations would have been a definite boost to the overall quality of this piece. Nonetheless, it is well-structured, well-written and seems to be well-researched.There are points that I agree with and disagree with, but personal bias aside, I must say that this piece is a job well done on a controversial topic.Good Job, Eggy.
- 28/04/2004
- 02:41:54
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You've had a good run with the Malcolm X series for racking up your points...how many pieces were there? three? four?...you can stretch a good thing only so far though...In light of a few splendid pieces you typed up on Malcom X, this has turned out to be a disappointment...If only it had a reference or to, hmmmm...I'll give this an average rating based soley on the fact that combined with the other Malcolm X contributions by Eggy, this helps to make the collection "well rounded"...
- 28/04/2004
- 02:35:49
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Crystal, Eggy, crystal...hmhmhm...I don't understand why this piece has received only average marks. It is well-structured, flows smoothly, covers a controversial topic and has great details coupled with classic narrations. How else could Eggy it up?Interesting read on an "interesting" topic.Good Job, Eggy.
- 28/04/2004
- 02:30:28
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Quite thorough, flow smoothly, full of detail, well-structured and well-thoughtout. This piece is easy to read, easy to understand and interesting to read. It is obvious that the author put forth good effort in writing this and it pays off by being a valuable research tool and great read.Great Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:50:10
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is extremely thorough, detailed, well-structured, and well-thoughtout. It's smooth flow makes it easy to read, easy to understand and interesting to read. This is quite a valuable item for research in any stage.Great Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:47:08
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece provides information in a brief and concise manner making it easy to read, clear to understand and a good research item.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:43:20
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This piece cuts straight to the chase and provides information on Steve Blackpool in a brief and concise manner. It's informative and concise quality make a good research item.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:41:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Though this piece was at times slightly choppy and might perhaps seem somewhat short, it is redeemed by it's quality of detail and singular focus of subject. This piece is useful as a research item.This sounds like an interesting play.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:37:52
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The grammatical and fundamental quality of this paper was strong enough that it compelled me to read it twice.This paper is well-written, flows quite smoothly and is quite interesting since it discusses a topic that is close to the heart of all patriotic American's. The detail and narrations in this piece added to it's quality and reading appeal.Great Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:33:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While I argue the "persuasive" in the title, as that varies from person to person, and only under exceptional circumstances am I "persuaded" in 572 words...The author obviously put research effort into this piece and that therefore clearly demonstrates that this piece is not just a hot air of blind .I can certainly understand how a small section of two might in some way offend someone, but it is quite clear that the author is not attempting to do so. One cannot say that the author is unbiased since the title itself dispels and doubt of that thought, I believe that personal bias (note, not but bias) notwithstanding the author did a good job of presenting a fair case.This subject is quite a sore spot in the history of America's great history and therefore there will be many a strong opinion. Anyone who is >strongly< opposed to or >strongly< in favor of this piece could be called racist or blind. That isn't the case though, the author simply stated personal opinion, which after I read, was not slanderous or racist and therefore does not deserve the criticism being recieved. The only way that wounds can be healed or enlightenment be brought about is if people can speak their minds freely. No one has to agree, but everyone should listen, since we are all affected.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:26:47
- Score: 16 out of 34 people found this comment useful.
The combination of technical information about the book with the authors personal opinion and revelation of how the author benefited from reading "The House on Mango Street" makes this piece a great read. It is well-structured, obviously well-thoughtout, provides excellent detail and is satisfactorily in-depth.I commend you on a piece well-done, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:14:06
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The combination of facts gathered through research and personal emotions and opinions in this piece make it not only informative but also interesting to read. Since the author isn't writing about the Holocaust in general but about personal understanding of this time in the worlds history, than 965 words is plenty long enough.Well-written with a smooth flow, good grammatical structure and solid opinion. This could be used as an editorial.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:09:51
- Score: 11 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Once again...smooth flow, well-written on an interesting topic. This piece does seem slightly short but is redeemed through the quality contained in what was written.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:03:10
- Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I would have liked to have read more, I get the feeling there is more to this story...nevertheless, this piece does provide detail, flows smoothly and is overall well-structured.Great topic, good job, MccaddenSucks.
- 28/04/2004
- 01:00:06
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
While the information that the author provides is in the majority accurate(I work in the entertainment industry), the grammar definitely needs improvement. Sentences and ideas are quite choppy but the author put forth good effort.Average rating.
- 28/04/2004
- 00:55:43
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
In order to agree with everthing written in this paper, than I would have to be completely Freudian...not meant as an insult to Freudians, just my philosophy...But my personal philosophy on the subject put aside...this is a wonderfully written piece. It provides great in-depth analysis without getting "stuffy". It flows smoothly and is quite interesting to read...This is a great research tool, especially for debate...Good Job...
- 27/04/2004
- 18:55:47
- Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This piece is well structured...provides timely narrations and flows smoothly.The analysis is pretty thorough and is a valuable tool for research...Good job.
- 27/04/2004
- 18:44:04
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written on a great topic. This piece is informative by providing great detail and narrations.great job.
- 27/04/2004
- 18:39:50
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is one of the best on it's subject to be found on cheathouse.comThis piece flows smoothly grammatically, is an interesting read on an age old topic, is well thought out and well structured.I highly recommend this piece. Great job, MccaddenSucks.Good rating.
- 26/04/2004
- 15:31:20
- Score: 6 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
This is a a touching piece that is interesting to read. Overall the grammar flows smoothly, it is structured well and expressed clearly. Great coverage of a great topic.Good rating, MccaddenSucks.
- 26/04/2004
- 15:21:26
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
My little brother (11 years old) wipes up the floor with writing of this calibre. You are in 11th grade? I find it hard to believe...If the grade was lower than this paper would be better, but as it stands, this is quite unsatisfactory.Let's assume that all of Malcolm's needs were covered on this chart, the in-depth is extremely lacking. That is the biggest problem that Eggy, as an author, has. Very broad and shallow papers. C'mon Eggy, get real, a FEW LINES for psychological needs? That would fill at least three paragraphs, minimum!!! There are so many aspects that could be discussed, from parent - child relationship, prevelance of , quality of education and the moral system in the family just to name a few possibilities. I won't go on about the other needs.A little tip for the author, "psychological" means of the mind, mental, related to human behavior. Air, water, food are not needed for this and you cannot steal what is needed for psychological needs. It might have been slightly more accurate if, Eggy, you had said physiological-"1. Biology dealing with life or living organisms; the study of the functions of the organs and parts during life, as distinct from anatomy 2. The organic processes and phenomena collectively. of an organism or part 3. A treatise on physiology"- needs.poor rating.
- 26/04/2004
- 10:19:37
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
OKAY...I always prefer to find something praiseworthy about peoples papers, but you make it very hard for me, Eggy. Luther vs. Malcolm in 422 words???!!! To add to that, you never went into a detailed discussion on anything that happened in either of their lives. This isn't long enough or in-depth enough for even one of their lives, let alone BOTH of them!!!This is an extremely brief overview of the chosen subject. It covers only the most basic information and does not discuss examples their philosophies and ods in action.I would have given this a poor rating if it hadn't cited resources. That is the most helpful part of this piece, research wise.average rating, barely.
- 26/04/2004
- 09:56:19
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great work, I've never heard of spider crabs before. While I thought that this piece was slightly short, it was full of great information from general to "technical"...This piece is informative and quite interesting to read...valuable research tool.Good rating, spoonman419.
- 24/04/2004
- 16:24:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Once again another great movie review by MccaddenSucks. I agree with ccmustangs that there is a little room for further in-depth analysis, but overall this is informative and interesting to read.Good Rating.
- 24/04/2004
- 14:27:06
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This piece is an excellent review of the Mona Lisa smile. Not only is it a technical review, which is what most movie reviews are, but the author also puts personal relation to the movie into this review, which, in my humble opinion, increases it's quality.Good Job, MccaddenSucks.
- 24/04/2004
- 14:19:30
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
This is one of your best pieces, Eggy. This paper is solid in all aspects of writing, while also being interesting to read. You picked a great topic and expressed your fact and opinion clearly and persuasively.Good Rating...
- 24/04/2004
- 14:13:25
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
What the bleeding devil is this? My little brothers work is better, and that's on a bad paper.C'mon, for Pete's sake, if 11th graders produce this kind of work, than our school system is going down the drain faster than I imagined...(the author didn't imply that these are notes, and they certainly don't have the ring of such, so one has to assume that this was a 159 word effort for 350 points, pretty good leverage. I get much better leverage on the stock market though especially in currency, futures, and daytrading on margin. Eggy, you may want to try that sometime.)Poor rating.
- 22/04/2004
- 18:59:47
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the philosophy that the Progressive Era accomplished many things...as it's name implies.There were many unfortunate chapters in the history of the United Sates of America, yet show me one nation that did not rise to power without a blemish or two on its record? In all my readings I have yet to come across such a nation (if someone knows of one, please, heartsround@yahoo.com)This paper is heavily biased toward a socialistic and pessimistic light, as the two go hand in hand.Not implying that there were any inaccuracies on the authors part, but one must becareful how one states things. There were so many lines I found offensive that I won't bother to go over them, except one which I found amusing, where it says that women had it hard having to work 12 hours a day, well the men had to work every waking hour and go back to ma and pa Ingalls and you will find that both had to work all their waking hours.You criticize the previous generation yet the next generation will criticize us, it's called being human...Poor rating.
- 22/04/2004
- 18:53:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Since George Washington is one of my favorite founding fathers and I have read at least four different accounts of his life, this piece doesn't exactly do justice to such an illustrious figure. Nevertheless, for a student on the un-envied task of dull research, this paper is quite useful considering that it is informative and written in an unorthodox narrative fashion, making it refreshing from the stuffiness of normal academics...Useful, informative and fun to read...Good Rating...
- 22/04/2004
- 18:39:20
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
In how far someone is willing to go in order to rack up their points...Combining this report with the first one would have made one decent paper but the author decided to submit two papers on the same book which, if I do my math correctly, nets 700 instead of 350 points.As before, the author has wonderful ideas the I would really like to read more about, yet she doesn't go in-depth on them...explaining the the fact of only 618 words...Average rating...
- 22/04/2004
- 18:29:43
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It is obvious that this subject is important to the author, yet this piece comes across as unfinished. The author starts many a wonderful idea but unfortunately does not go in-depth on them. I found this piece quite interesting as some of the viewpoints I completely disagreed with and therefore wanted to read more. I am sure that the author's quality of writing will improve with over time.Average rating.
- 22/04/2004
- 18:24:07
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I don't know what kind of school you come from...all I can say is that the school I graduated from would consider this a joke...I would have been on the edge of being punished...if not just made a public example of...As for my personal opinion...there is room for improvement with the transition between thoughts and the length is quite short. The information provided is informative enough to provide the reader with a basic grasp of the book...average rating.
- 22/04/2004
- 18:13:55
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Once again you have a great topic but end up rushing through and producing the quality that I have seen in other works by you, Eggy. This is quite disappointing because true writers do not sell themselves short and I know you can do much better than this.Do not get so point hungry that you lose quality in your writing, it won't matter in the long run, usually nobody stays on top forever and than the only thing that will count is the quality of your work.
- 08/04/2004
- 19:43:25
- Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Wow, this piece is quite informative and useful. Not only is it thorough but it is also an interesting read. The author did a good job of keeping it grammatically, technically and fundamentally sound. It has a good flow on a great topic.Great Job, sunny-malhi.
- 06/04/2004
- 19:00:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
There is definitely room for expansion considering that the life of one of the greatest scientists was discussed.Overall though, this piece is informative and a starting point for research. You should put some more effort into it next time, but I've seen worse.Average rating.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:56:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is great work coming from a ninth grader. It is informative and long enough to be suitably thorough.If you are researching the life of Elizabeth Taylor than this is a useful piece.Good Job.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:53:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is very informative and thorough. It provides and in-depth analysis which is clearly communicated making this piece quite a valuable research tool.Great job and keep up the good work.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:50:03
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
While this is somewhat informative, I've seen much better from juniors. Perhaps creating an outline before you write your essays would help you improve your structure and the grammatical quality of the piece.Fair job, average rating.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:36:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Even though it is technically to short to be considered an >essay<. It is much better than a previous of "mice or men" report I read by the same author.There is room for expansion and further in-depth analysis, but this is passable.Fair Job, Average rating.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:29:06
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Thorough, descriptive and informative. Grammatically, technically and fundamentally solid. What more can you ask for? Well, it is an interesting read too.Excellent job, hope to see more.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:25:22
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
For a ninth grader this, how do they say, up to ?...Not too shabby, really. This makes for an interesting read and it is pretty much sound grammatically.Good Rating and keep up the good work.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:11:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I've seen better, I've seen worse. Since I'm an actor than I can see how this could be used as an aide in a character analysis, as a starting point though. It is quite short but considering I've seen much worse, this gets an average rating.p.s. put more effort into it next, seems like a case of laziness.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:05:38
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Even though there is plenty of room for expansion in this >summary< considering that just the sheer volume of technologies being invented during this time period are almost too numerous to list, this summary is informative and it's structure is okay.Average Rating.
- 06/04/2004
- 18:00:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is exceptional for a seventh grader. This is a great mixture of creativity with fact which is quite informative.Great Job.
- 06/04/2004
- 17:56:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Thorough, informative and grammatically, technically and fundamentally sound. It is obvious that the author researched the chosen subject and did a great job of communicating his/her thoughts clearly.Excellent Job.
- 06/04/2004
- 17:36:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
After reviewing the literature related to horses in my liibrary I've concluded that there is room for expansion on this topic. Since you barely even started touching on the anatomy of a horse. Nevertheless, the parts that you chose to include in your piece are pretty much thorough and informative...I'll have to say good job.
- 06/04/2004
- 17:30:36
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
In respect to the majority of the material that is submitted on this site, yes this is pathetic. Yet, for a fifth grader I don't think this is too bad. I wrote better than this when I was in fifth, but writing runs in my family. You have to applaud the effort.Average rating.
- 06/04/2004
- 17:26:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Someone may not agree with the statement of this piece but everyone is entitled to their opinion and that is what makes humans different from animals, we have opinions. While this piece does not cite references it is well-written. It seems that the negatives and positives are balanced so I say this is an average job.
- 06/04/2004
- 15:30:53
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Wow, not only was this piece thorough, informative and grammatically, technically and fundamentally sound but it was also interesting to read because it flows smoothly and discusses an interesting topic.Great Job,physhstyxz.
- 06/04/2004
- 15:22:07
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Grammatically this piece is definitely suffering. How can something like this be produced by a college sophomore? I just do not comprehend it. The actual subject of choice is excellent and it is obvious that the author had wonderful ideas. Unfortunately those ideas were not communicated clearly and therefore this peice is found quite lacking.
- 06/04/2004
- 15:12:31
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Thorough and informative. This piece provides strong research material and is also an interesting read. The grammar is definitely up to .Good Job, suttsy.
- 06/04/2004
- 15:07:39
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
An interesting read, though I don't think that this piece is really that informative. Like glengem said, citing your sources would have lent credibility to your piece.Average Job.
- 06/04/2004
- 14:15:47
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty thorough piece and is inoformative enough to provide valuable information for someone researching the subject. Well written and insightful.Fair Job.
- 06/04/2004
- 14:07:24
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is an informative piece that is thorough, insightful and is technically, grammatically and fundamentally sound. It has a good flow and does a fine job of covering the selected key points adequately.Good Job.
- 06/04/2004
- 13:47:50
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The technical and grammatical quality of this piece are pretty much up to . Fudamentally it could be improved, one of the ways being what glengem suggests. I would have expected more from a college studen but overall though, not half bad.average job, jasmo77.
- 06/04/2004
- 11:37:34
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I agree with glengem, but otherwise than what was pointed out you did a pretty good job of it. You also managed to stay on track with the first person narrative throughout the piece. This does contain good information and is a good read.Good Job, troyvan.
- 06/04/2004
- 11:31:13
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Give me a stinkin' break...there is no way that this recieved an 82% rating on a college level. Either you are lying or you have the lousiest teachers. 456 words does not qualify as an essay and what kind of brain do you have that you would try to put behavioral psychology of children into such a short piece?...Poor Job, cowhide00.
- 06/04/2004
- 11:26:42
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
First off, I agree with both allythegr8 and glengem, you need to take both of their advice under consideration. Second off, you tried to cram a complicated and lengthy subject into a very short piece and did not even cite any references. You brought up some great points, but they were pretty much in one sentence form which is quite unacceptable. You needed to expound on those ideas and perhaps drafting an outline before you write would help with the structure of the paper and also help to explain your ideas more clearly.Average Job, studmfn683.
- 06/04/2004
- 10:32:07
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This piece is way to short to be an essay and it doesn't provide enough information to be a valuable article. When you write a piece dealing with psychology and sociology than you have to describe case studies in order to prove your point. Just saying things makes it your singular opinion which is quite isolated and bears very little significance to the rest of the world.Poor Job, asunder17.
- 06/04/2004
- 10:25:07
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This isn't exactly accurate or perhaps you weren't thorough enough, Eggy. Anything referring to slavery would have been an amendment made by the likes of Webster and Calhoun, if I'm not mistaken. For the amount of references you have cited I would have expected more than 1004 words...and references notwithstanding, this topic needs to be covered much more thoroughly...The saving grace is that you provide references which are a valuable research item.Average job, Eggy.
- 05/04/2004
- 22:46:34
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You didn't really go either way with this piece. It isn't short enough to be crappy and not long and/or thorough enough to be good. The citing of references saves it.It sounded like you were thinking about something much bigger yet unfortunately failed to capture it in writing thus not being able to share it with your reader.Nice try though, Eggy.
- 05/04/2004
- 21:46:50
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece could have been more thorough by expanding on key points and perhaps employing examples considering that there are an abundance of them. Nevertheless, this piece is informative and it does cite references which make it valuable.Fair Job, Eggy.
- 05/04/2004
- 21:42:42
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I could play a devil's advocate and state that in reality you haven't even touched the tip of the iceberg, but only jokingly because I think you did a great job not only providing good research material but making it an interesting read.Good Job, Eggy.
- 05/04/2004
- 21:39:04
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You picked an excellent topic that is quite fresh and controversial, started out great yet suddenly left me hanging. I had hoped that you would go into detail as this was the next logical step, yet you only stated that these amendments had been broken and did not give any examples. Now, we have all heard about this, but looking at this one piece, a judge would call it hearsay. You need to back it up with legitimate examples.
- 05/04/2004
- 21:33:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I applaud you Eggy, this is an informative piece that is a valuable research tool and perhaps one of your finer works. Excellent job grammatically and you picked a great topic to write about. Hope to see more of the same...Great Job...
- 05/04/2004
- 21:29:28
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is self-contradicting which makes it fundamentally lacking. It is also grammatically and technically suffering. The author needs to seriously research a topic, take notes, create a case study and observe how the other characters treat the highlighted characters(Jima and Huck)...Poor Rating...
- 05/04/2004
- 21:24:47
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Do you have any kids? Daughters to be exact? You wouldn't care if they became s? If you wouldn't, than you also wouldn't care if they had with total strangers, became users, and developed a low self-esteem. Those are just three things that would occur from a bucketfull of negative potential. You say that being a won't lead to such things? HAHAHA...First off, you wouldn't become a unless you were a loser and all the other things you listed and second off, s and that realm of life go hand in glove like a casino and prostitution. Actually ask questions and read case studies before you state a thesis. You wrote this to make yourself feel better about being and ty, whether it be you or someone you know...
- 05/04/2004
- 20:31:43
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is informative, thorough and insighful. Definitely can be used as a research item. It is pretty much grammatically sound and conclusive.Good Job, glengem.
- 05/04/2004
- 15:47:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is creative and an interesting idea glengem. Not a bad piece actually, in the hands of the right entrepreneur this could be profitable for investors and beneficial for society.Good Job.
- 05/04/2004
- 15:43:15
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It would help if you listed what grade level your pieces are. If this is 7th grade level than you do quite a good job. If this is Freshman level or higher, stop wasting time writing and start reading in order to get a better grasp of literature. If you write many reports on movies, than we know how you spend your time, WASTING IT.
- 05/04/2004
- 15:39:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This piece is flawed in what I consider the three standards: grammatically, technically and fundamentally. Either you (author) didn't put much time into writing this or are not very knowledgeable on this subject...Poor work
- 05/04/2004
- 15:33:52
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
While the shortness of this piece is pushing the envelope...the fact that it provides enough information for three good notecards I'd say it deserves an average rating...I know you can do better though, EnergyCoffee...
- 04/04/2004
- 23:22:51
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The structure of this piece is solid and the the author provides excellent research material with the quality of the body and references...Excellent Job, EnergyCoffee...
- 04/04/2004
- 23:20:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Sorry, I meant to give this piece a good rating and ally clicked average...
- 04/04/2004
- 23:18:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Because of the vastness of the topic, the author can get away with a 492 word piece...ON a topic such as this you go either short, painting an overall picture and pointing the researchee into the right direction (which is what EnergyCoffee has done), or you go into great details and end up with at least 4000 words...Well-written...Good Job...
- 04/04/2004
- 23:15:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Once again, I congratulate EnergyCoffee on a piece well-done...this is an excellent addition to cheathouse.com.This piece is grammatically, technically and fundamentally solid...Once agian, details make the masterpiece...
- 04/04/2004
- 23:11:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great Job EnergyCoffee...this is a well-written, thorough piece that makes for a great research tool.You did a good job of describing details while not losing sight of the main topic..As they say..."God is in the details"...
- 04/04/2004
- 23:08:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
STOP wasting people's time...NO research quality in this paper...and DON'T tell me this piece received a 97% rating...you wrote this for points on cheathouse.com, Eggy...and you seem to have an abundance of them...being determined to pass me is admirable...but wasting your own time and that of others is not....
- 04/04/2004
- 22:57:41
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Listen Eggy...I don't know where you come from, but it isn't where I've been...Now...The opening of the essay is pretty good...It states the general "specs" of , and in my opinion it was an accurate portrayal in a nutshell...Moving on though...Racism is not just a "white people" problem...I live between LA and Seattle...trust me, I know.I see almost every day, and it is evenly balanced between all ethnicities...don't believe me?...go to a public high school in LA...BUT...you will also see multi-racial friendships...I DO see a black guy dating an asian , in LA and Seattle...The bottom line is that is as a unique a problem as the amount of unique people...you cannot categorize it...Also, this piece is suffering in grammatical quality...reads of lowere grade level...
- 04/04/2004
- 22:42:20
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Creative and thought provoking...This piece is a good read and is pretty much grammatically solid...Definitely a Great Job and Green rating...Way to go, Eggy...
- 02/04/2004
- 03:37:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Room for expansion of information...I mean if you are going to publish notes than you must gloss them over a bit, no?...not too bad though...Short enough that it won't hurt running one's lenses over it...
- 02/04/2004
- 03:29:19
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Reads a bit rushed, but than we live in an age of instant gratification...so I shoudn't complain...Valuable information and could help a tardy student or two with a last minute cram session...hmhmhm...You'll have to forgive my stubborness on this one...I'm an actor myself...so the bar is a little higher, as it were...Not too shabby, Eggy
- 02/04/2004
- 03:26:16
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hey, I was hungry for points too...but at least I submitted pieces that are long enough to be informative and conclusive...Give me a break Eggy, want points...go rate something...not waste your time...
- 02/04/2004
- 03:14:45
- Score: 12 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
Hey, Eggy, life is full of conflicts...I submitted my essays about a month and half and it has taken almost three-quarters of year to get comments on all of them...and that's if you're number 1 for a while...While the grammatical quality of the paper is up to , as they say, I personally disagree with the actual thesis and perhaps will "publish" my own counter-thesis someday, but as for now...well...in the past 5 days one grandmother died, one grandfather suffered a second stroke, parents are about to divorce, and I got a $711 ticket for speeding and driving without a license...so I'm not in a mood to write..
- 02/04/2004
- 03:11:01
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Hey, pretty good for how short it is...There is definitely room for expansion though, considering that the topic has been chronicled in practically countless volumes of various literature...Still, it is informative and a starting point for anyone reading on the topic...
- 02/04/2004
- 02:59:25
- Score: 23 out of 30 people found this comment useful.
I apologize....I had been distracted when I was submitting this essay and realized my mistake only after I had clicked finish...I enjoy Nirvana myself, so the mistake wasn't done on purpose, I feel guilty about it myself...
- 28/01/2004
- 13:21:12
- Score: 12 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
I know that I didn't write this well when I was in seventh grade. Can I even remember that far back?...oh, well...anywho...While there is room for improvement in this paper grammar wise, especially employing conjunctions; and fundamentally wise also by the information provided which could go further in depth. But for a seventh grader this is an excellent paper.Good Job.
- 08/12/2003
- 00:11:16
- Score: 14 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
While the grammar in this piece is choppy, bad enough to be quite disappointing for a college sophomore, the information actually provided is quite useful and it is obvious that the author did put some effort into this paper.Botom line: A useful resource.
- 28/11/2003
- 21:24:46
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Wow...this paper provides an insightful glimpse into a major issue of the 21st century...Well thought with pertinent information and useful ideas...Great Job..
- 28/11/2003
- 21:21:26
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well researched and well written...thorough and informative...As naive as this sounds, I wish we didn't have pollution. hmhmhmhm.Oh well, 'till then we have this paper to provide people with valuable material for research...Good Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 21:16:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Interesting to read...though somewhat choppy at times.Nevertheless, provides an insightful look into a major concern of many scientists today...Fair Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 21:11:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper is informing and well thought out...It is a good resource for it's topic...Easy to read and understand...works for any grade level...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 21:04:07
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
CRIIIINNNNGGGGE....This paper is PACKED with information...but it doesn't discuss each point...could be an excellent resource...but it is to short and brief...It is in dire need of improvement...Sadly I have to give this an average rating...
- 28/11/2003
- 21:01:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
If somebody needs a paper to research material on this topic...this is the paper to go to...It is chalkfull of useful information, supported facts, and well based theory...One of the best papers on this topic, on cheathouse.com...Excellent Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 20:57:08
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I found this paper quite interesting to read...it is well thought out by the author and thought provoking for the reading...Offers a variety of useful information and interesting ideas...Keep up the good work...
- 28/11/2003
- 20:53:18
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The author did a good job of researching material, and obviously put time into writing this paper.It uses "simple" language to describe a complex topic. Being easy to understand makes it a good resource for research.Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 20:49:38
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Wow...for 10th grade this paper is of excellent quality...It flows smoothly, is well-researched, well-written employing tactical use of words and great ideas...This is absolutely an excellent research tool for any level of education...Excellent Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 20:45:22
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great opening...but you abruptly ended the paper without going into detail about the "possibilities"...The paper didn't really support the title...But it did provide the bud for a research project...Average Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 20:36:58
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
If one believes in evolution...this is a great read...If one believes in creation...this is a bunch of baloney...Either way...well-written and though out...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 20:25:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was an interesting paper...I really enjoyed reading it.It flowed smoothly and is full of valuable information...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 20:23:11
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a bunch of rubbish...Sure, the topic chosen is an interesting one and worth writing about....But, thats AFTER you research material so as to provide students with quality information...This is a bunch of baloney...it doesn't even come near doing justice to it's chosen topic...POOR JOB...
- 28/11/2003
- 19:20:17
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Brief and to-the-point...while there is room for improvement, in terms of research and depth...This paper does provide a fair overview of inflation in a nutshell...A good starting point for research on this topic...Fair Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 19:16:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Absolutely a quality paper...descriptive, informative, well-researched and well-written...An excellent research tool for anybody...Excellent Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 19:14:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
As someone who invests heavily in various markets...I can say that this paper is accurate and provides valuable information to beginning investors...Great Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 19:11:44
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
An interesting p.o.v.Flows smoothly and expresses it's topic well...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 19:09:02
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Since you wrote this paper...you migh be interested in reading my piece..Benjamin Franklin: Founding Fraudster?well done...
- 28/11/2003
- 18:35:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Minus the few grammar mistakes...I found this paper very interesting...probably because I am a descendent of the Vikings...oh well...Great Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 18:29:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Flows smoothly...iinforms the reader and supports the title...Overall a fair item for research and/or leisure reading...Good Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 17:56:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While I agree with a few portions of this diatribe...overall, I disagree...Yes, testing the hairspray and ovencleaner on open eyes is pushing the envelope...But, I don't hear you complaining about all the vaccines, anti-biotics, and other various medicines that have been created, and would have been impossible without animal testing. Unless, of course...you still think that is unfair, go volunteer to be infected, hmm? why not?...ohhh...I see....You're not complaining that the rabbit, guniea pig, dog, cat, mouse, that all of them were infected with a diseases, and than monitered. Why, because you you're still alive today, instead of dying of polio, parkinsons, and other diseases...So don't get all self-righteous without telling the full story...Bottom line: man is the nt species, and has a full right to exploit all available resources. It is up to us to be wise stewards with those resources, but nevertheless, they are there for our benefit...If animals have as much rights as us, and aren't as "cruel" as humans...go out into a forest without a form of defense and ask a grizzly if it would like to dance...
- 28/11/2003
- 16:35:26
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
While this paper, perhaps, suffers slightly in terms of smooth flow and depth of material...It is thought provoking and informs the reader regardless...One of the things that I, personally, find subjective is that the condition of the UN today, hinders any positive democratic progress that could be made. The UN is in dire need of strong leadership, as in a leader with a backbone who doesn't just "slap the hands" of rogue states.And doesn't put nations that committ genocide in the position of responsibility...Overall, fair job...
- 28/11/2003
- 16:07:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This has nothing to do with the UN...Also...this reads like a "profile next to a mugshot"...While it could be used for technical information in research...there is mammoth room for improvement in the fundamental aspect of writing...Poor Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 16:01:30
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A well-organized, well-written piece that provides valuable information for research...Great Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 15:58:54
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper is well-written and thorough in stating it's argument...Yet, I personally disagree...If one were to look back through history, one will see the gradual deterioration of traditions national sovereignity...also, with the mass proliferation of technology in the 21st century, global economies are steadily becoming integrated...and the bottom line is "the way to a man is through his stomach"...So while the previous generation vanishes...generation X brings a new dawn to mankind, A One World Government may not happen even in this generation, but it is inevitable...Fair job on writing the paper...
- 28/11/2003
- 15:56:28
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A well-written, thought provoking paper.Not much else to add, chattering_lory summed it up nicely...Good paper...
- 28/11/2003
- 15:49:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I have no clue what this paper has to do with the UN...but, oh well...For what the paper is titled, it does a good job of describing factors in how presidents are ranked by approval...A useful research tool...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 15:46:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Definitely lacking.This paper is in dire need of research and organization. For such a complex topic this paper is not nearly long enough in the first place...let alone the fact that the quality of the material provided is virtually non-existant.I would expect a much better paper from a 12 grade student...This paper got a 90%...either you are lying or your teacher is ignorant of political matters...Poor Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 15:41:26
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
While this paper could be reorganized and go more in-depth, it does a mediocre job of describing the various functions of the UN...This paper is written well enough to be a good research tool...Fair Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 15:35:37
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a well-written paper that provides interesting information and is thought provoking.Great Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 15:29:56
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A technically and fundamentally sound piece.The material presented in this paper is of good quality, making for good research material.Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:38:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
An interesting and thought-provoking paper that is of an informative calibre.A great research item. This paper does a satisfactory job of dissecting various facets of the EU.Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:34:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
One of the best papers on this site.Nothing more, nothing less.Excellent Work.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:30:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Okay...this paper is in dire need of restructuring, this is almost a disgrace for a college senior. The author needs to make a habit of using an outline and thoroughly researching each point.The content actually discussed in the paper is a great topic that could be of really good use as a research item for students, but once again, the author seriously needs to hone communication abilities.Poor Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:28:30
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It is obvious that the author put time into this paper...the quality of the information deserves a higher grade than 65%.A good research item.Well Done.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:23:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Brief, to-the-point, informative, well-researched.Definitely quality material to say the least.Bottom line:STREAMLINED.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:19:04
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
while it may be re-structured to make the reading flow smoother, the quality of the information provided blots out any negatives...A good research item.Well done...
- 28/11/2003
- 02:16:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While the content of this paper is informative, it is badly structured, requiring a clearer description of topics. This paper can be understood easily by someone like myself who practically breathes global politics, but for someone not familiar with the topic this paper would be confusing.Which is sad since what the paper talks about is quite important and crucial in today's society.I would expect better work from a college sophomore, but oh well...Average rating.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:13:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I can't believe this paper was rated 70%!!!!!!!!The professor is a serious grouch n' slouch.The quality and quantity of the material provided in this paper is quite excellent. Informative and thorough to say the least.An excellent research tool.Excellent Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:06:46
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Wow, I think this paper deserves a higher grade than 86%...oh well.This is definitely a top-notch paper that is well-researched, thorough, informative, and in-depth.It has good unity and coherence, it seems the author knows the topic quite well.Excellent Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 02:02:50
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This paper is informative and thought provoking...well-written, it flows smoothly throughout the paper making it easy to read and simple to understand for someone who has no knowledge whatsoever...Definitely a piece to be used for research and/or leisure reading...Excellent Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 01:58:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A fair job of analyzing the two.It is well-researched that can be used for research and/or leisure reading.Alright Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 01:53:59
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
While this paper is slightly "rusty" grammar wise...it is informative and well researched from a business perspective...This can definitely be used as a research tool...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 00:27:07
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well outlined and written.While this could be considered a CASE STUDY..it seems to melt under both categories...Well researched and written...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 00:23:57
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is an informative paper that provides valuable information to students and people interested in starting a small business...Great Job...
- 28/11/2003
- 00:21:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Definitely could be developed..does not do justice to it's topic...Also...this really is a CASE STUDY...not ACCOUNTING...POOR JOB.
- 28/11/2003
- 00:18:37
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I found this piece quite thought provoking...it has interesting outlook...or perhaps I've read on this topic before, but the author wasn't as gifted as this one...oh, well...bottom line...great paper...for either research or leisure reading...
- 28/11/2003
- 00:14:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
While I appreciate the information in this paper...it does jump from subject to subject without satisfactory description of each individual topic...perhaps the author could try using outlines when writing papers...But overall a good paper that can definitely be used by someone for research...Fair Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 00:11:30
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
If an assistant wrote this report...I'd like to see it on my desk..it is brief, to the point, but describes it's subject satisfactorily...Good Job.
- 28/11/2003
- 00:06:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Okay...this paper does not do justice to it's topic...definitely not informative or deep enough. There is so much more to this topic...Perhaps the author could try writing papers using an outlines...that may be a helpful....poor job...
- 28/11/2003
- 00:02:55
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
While some may view this paper as being slightly to technical, it is informative and can definitely be used as a resource for research along with other material.Good Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 23:56:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper is slightly disappointing...it lacks in description and depth. Definitely room for improvment.I give this an average rating.
- 27/11/2003
- 23:27:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Thorough, informative, well-written, and in-depth. Definitely a great research tool. Good unity and coherence.Excellent Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 23:24:11
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper could definitely be developed further, but it provides enough information to be useful in some form.Average Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 23:12:39
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is one of the best papers in this category. It is informative, thorough, well-written, and well-researched. It is obvious that the author put time and effort into researching the topic and stated it clearly.I recommend this paper to everybody who is studying this topic, it is an excellent research tool.Excellent Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 23:05:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This paper is good resource for a beginner in this field of study, whether it be for personal study or school assignment. It is clearly written and flows smoothly, speaking business wise.Average Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 23:02:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
First off, this is a CASE STUDY not ACCOUNTING, so this paper has been categorized incorrectly.Second off, I would have expected material of a much higher calibre from a college senior. Anyone who is familiar with case studies, knows what I am talking about.Bottom line is: This paper does a mediocre job of analyzing Aloha products.
- 27/11/2003
- 15:49:56
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
While this paper is profoundly lacking in technical quality about the profession, and the grammar seems to speak of a lower calibre than 11th grade, I guess it is a passable attempt at describing accountants, or should I say accounting.This is an average piece.
- 27/11/2003
- 15:44:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
While I found this paper to be slightly lacking in extensive descriptions of the main points. It still gets the point across and I especially enjoyed how the author chronicled the accounting profession in througout history.Well Done.
- 27/11/2003
- 15:41:11
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
This paper is quite informative and very well-researched. It goes in-depth and is smoothly written.This paper clearly demonstrates the authors knowledge of this topic.I would recommend this paper as a research tool to anybody, Great Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 15:37:24
- Score: 9 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Maybe it's just me, but how does this paper fit in under the category of Business>>>Accounting...???...While it has nothing of financial information or mathematical quality, it is interesting to read.The topic that the paper was actually written about, though, could definitely have been developed much further and deeper.I see this over and over again. Whenever someone writes about a social issue, they MUST develop the subject completely and thoroughly; because "Social Studies" is perhaps one of the most important things in this world, in reference to how future generations affect the world. Therefore, it is not something to be taken lightly when written about.I give this paper an average rating.
- 27/11/2003
- 15:30:51
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This paper is an extremely valuable tool for any student doing research on the subject. Yes, while it may not be an "interesting" read for someone not interested in the subject; for someone like myself who is surrounded by such things everyday, this is interesting to read. So, the cranial entertainment capability of this paper may not be high, but the quality of the material is quite valuable...Great Job...I would recommend this as a strong research tool...
- 27/11/2003
- 15:24:14
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is an extremely informative and well-written piece...that goes in depth and provides excellent research material...The author had the right stuff on this one...Great Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 15:18:20
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It is obvious that this piece is well-researched and shows the author's ability to clearly state and explain the title of his/her papers.An excellent research tool that can be used by a student on any level.Excellent Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 14:06:40
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is informative on a technical and fundamental basis. Well researched and clearly written; makes for a good article and research tool.Excellent Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 14:03:25
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is an interesting piece. While could be developed a little further, or should I say, deeper. It is informative and thought provoking.Kind of like Alice in Wonderland, for all of you CPA's out there. HAHAHA.Good Job on writing and interesting paper.
- 27/11/2003
- 14:00:37
- Score: 13 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
A brief and informative analysis. A good research item for someone studying in this area.Has good coherence and unity, speaking business wise.Good Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 13:57:35
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
As someone who invests heavily in various markets, I can say that this paper is accurate, informative, and a strong research tool...Great Job.
- 27/11/2003
- 13:55:08
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I guess the grass is always greener on the other side...lol...this isn't an essay...but then...nothing I have submitted is either...a very interesting and enlightening read...I actually read it twice...yankee842 is right...you must have written this in a moment of emotional fever...lol...good job...p.s. Hope you find a way to earn the money...
- 22/11/2003
- 11:04:41
- Score: 19 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
this is an excellent research resource...it is in depth and descriptive...excellent job...
- 22/11/2003
- 10:56:48
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this paper is not an essay it is an article that I wrote for a newsletter.It submitted it to this site as a research tool for somebody researching the subject...I believe it provides valuable information for a research project...definitely not the finished project...but certainly provides a few notes...
- 13/11/2003
- 15:20:24
- Score: 8 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
hey...I would really like to know what people are finding negative about this piece?...I cannot improve my writing if I am not told where I lack...
- 13/11/2003
- 00:07:42
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
First off this a well written piece...second off..kittenpause1...Czar is the correct way to spell the word...Tsar is the colloquial version of it...since the majority of teenagers don't really give a care about education. So they try to make everything easier on themselves.
- 09/11/2003
- 10:15:48
- Score: 9 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
this paper is right on the money...everything written in this paper is exactly correct. Restricting guns will annihilate any possibility of having a healthy militia. And it will only serve to make criminals stronger. This in turn would make the militia look like criminals because they would have guns when other citizens wouldn't which would give the government an excuse to exterminate them. Does Ruby Ridge ring a bell?...Each and every man and woman should be able to have a firearm.
- 09/11/2003
- 10:08:51
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
overall an average piece. While the author does express the topic clearly. The piece definitely lacks depth and thoroughness. All right.
- 08/11/2003
- 14:44:30
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Excellent Job. This paper is informative, thorough, and well structured. It is obvious that the author is on top of the ball when it came to research. A great research tool for anybody to use. Once again...Excellent Job.
- 08/11/2003
- 14:42:49
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is well written and satisfactorily thorough. A definite help to anyone who needs resources on the topic of BPD. Good Job.
- 08/11/2003
- 14:40:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is well written and informative...the author did a pretty good job.
- 06/11/2003
- 12:03:49
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
not too bad, not too bad. Pretty good job.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:59:56
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
sure, I guess if someone isn't busy than it would be worth reading. certainly not informative in any technical light.bottom line...fair job.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:58:20
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
listen up...I work in the entertainment industry...film making/directing/acting/producing/ etc,..When you critique a film...be hard-nosed, to the stinkin' point, and use big words to take up less space. Oh yeah, and when you do critique, TAKE NOTES WHILE WATCHING THE MOVIE...AND...WATCH IT MORE THAN ONE TIME.Bottom line is be as compact and powerful as possible. OKAY?...overall, not TOO bad.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:54:15
- Score: 5 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
could have been better written with more in depth description and explanations...but bottom line...it is acceptable...and is an informative read...borderline.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:49:04
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
What the stinkin' jeepers is this?...some kind of joke?...For pete's sake...stop wasting peoples time...some of us consider it a precious commodity you know...First off...go back to junior high and learn grammar structure.Second off...Cigarettes do NOT relax you, genius.Third off...oh man...forget it...this whole paper stinks...get a life.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:46:32
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
What the heck is your title supposed to mean...Shakespeare wrote plays to demonstrate the human condition...The entire point of Romeo and Juliet would be non-existant. sheesh get a life.p.s. If you can't spell Shakespeare's name...don't write about him.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:42:26
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
As someone who's neighbor and friend has epilepsy...I can say without a doubt that this piece is accurate, informative, and well researched. On a grammatical note...this piece has good unity. This paper is also a good research tool for someone studying the topic. Great Job.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:39:21
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This paper is quite thorough with solid examples and it is an interesting read that is written about a critical issue. Good Job.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:36:51
- Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I whole-heartedly agree with ccmustangs...and you know what?..I don't even have to love America(though I do)...and I would still agree with ccmustangs. It's like this...the grass always seems greener on the other side...and if you are naive to think thus...then by all means...take a hike.Sophia_lispectator...there is a difference between an independent thinker and a whiner.Benjamin Franklin's society of free-thinkers were "independent thinkers".The Nazi party were a society of free thinkers who were "independent thinkers"."Ben's" were methodical people. Nazi's were whiners.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:21:25
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
The author took an intricate subject and did a satisfactory job of stating the title. It always shows when the author did adequete research to make a fundamentally sound paper. Good Job.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:14:05
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
while it is lacking grammaticaly...this piece is quite informative and interesting to read. Fair Job.
- 06/11/2003
- 11:10:24
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a well written paper. It is thorough, informative, and clear states and explains its title. It is obvious that the author took time to research and make this paper have strong unity and coherence. This is a good research item for its subject. Good Job.
- 06/11/2003
- 10:57:05
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
A great thorough piece......well written and presented...good job.
- 05/11/2003
- 21:54:02
- Score: 19 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
This is quite interesting, this is a well written piece and the author did a good job of keeping the paper smooth and fluid. Great Job.
- 19/10/2003
- 13:18:27
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a well written paper. It is clearly thought out and explained. It is obvious that the author put time and effort into writing this piece. Great Job.
- 19/10/2003
- 13:14:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I am a stockholder in Boeing...therefore I get their quarterly report...what the author wrote is semi-accurate...some things are completely omitted...and certain points are delved deeple enough into.
- 12/10/2003
- 15:11:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a well written paper that is informative and clearly presented. Great Job.
- 12/10/2003
- 14:18:23
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a very informative paper. The author does a good job of clearly presenting and describing the case. Great Job.
- 12/10/2003
- 12:06:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an accurate paper...I can say this because I work as a model and am around this environment.(yes, guys wear makeup in this industry). Perhaps the author would be interested in reading my article on "non-drug methods for treatment and prevention of acne, facial blemished, etc."...
- 08/10/2003
- 07:06:41
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper could have been longer and more in depth, and the only reason I say that is because the topic is very interesting. Nonetheless, a great read, and a starting point for independent research.
- 06/10/2003
- 14:37:13
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This is a well-thought out and well-written paper. I enjoyed reading this paper.
- 06/10/2003
- 09:54:11
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
It is obvious that the author thoroughly enjoyed this movie and put a lot of thought into writing this paper. Accurately descriptive.
- 06/10/2003
- 09:45:17
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a thorough and informative piece. The author obviously put a lot of time and effort into this. Excellent Job.
- 05/10/2003
- 16:45:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a well written and thorough paper. Good research tool. great job.
- 05/10/2003
- 16:33:55
- Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
As usual your notes are up to snuff.
- 04/10/2003
- 15:41:32
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I work in this industry and from personal experience this paper lacks detail and depth.
- 02/10/2003
- 21:38:34
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The paper itself is well written, but am confused as to whether this piece is about Roger Moore or Roger Smith?
- 02/10/2003
- 21:24:08
- Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is a well thought and well written paper. This paper is intelligent enough for someone familiar with the subject and simple enough for someone with no clue about the topic. Great Work.
- 02/10/2003
- 20:37:10
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I disagree with this paper...this would have been a major issue earlier in the last century, but not so much anymore...the last generation, that is starting to rapidly die off, is being replaced by a younger generation that is more compromising and less resentful.
- 02/10/2003
- 20:13:46
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Thorough and informative work. Good research tool. Good Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 18:29:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out and well written. Good Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 18:24:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a well-written paper that is a good research tool. Good Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 17:49:36
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a well-written paper, interesting, and smooth. Excellent work.Atlyichnya Ryabotya.
- 02/10/2003
- 16:27:21
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I have absolutely nothing to add to this paper but my praise for its quality. Superb Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 14:51:16
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is one of the best papers I have ever read. The author does a wonderful job of clearly stating and explaing the three main topic points. Excellent Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 14:46:14
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Clear, concise, and does an excellent job of starting and tying in a conclusion in a space of few words. Good research tool. Great Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 14:37:54
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I have heard a line hear, a line their about this subject, but I have never really studied it. I don't have too. This paper, in a nutshell, explains the main points quite thoroughly for such a short paper-in relation to such a complex psychological issue. Excellent Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 14:34:20
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Looking at the current situation, yes, it is quite difficult to believe that Israelis and Palestinians will lead a peaceful co-existance. Nevertheless, with the world steadily embracing globalism, it is only a matter of time.
- 02/10/2003
- 14:26:19
- Score: 25 out of 32 people found this comment useful.
This is a well-written paper on a topic very much at the forefront of society. Good Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 11:26:16
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper could go deeper into social and psychological issues, but overall a good paper.
- 02/10/2003
- 11:23:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
These are thorough notes. Informative and brief. Good Job.
- 02/10/2003
- 07:45:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very thorough and informative paper. Well-written and thought out. Excellent Job.
- 01/10/2003
- 22:09:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A well-written paper on quite an interesting topic. Could contain better depth and thoroughness, but nonetheless, an interesting read.
- 01/10/2003
- 21:25:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Finally, a good paper...wait...actually...excellent paper.Yes, I understand it is not exactly an essay or thesis. Nonetheless, it is a good research tool, and it does justice to its subject. Great Job.
- 01/10/2003
- 21:03:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your title is slightly confusing...???...People do not choose either sex role...they are born thus...transvestites, crossdressers, and anybody else who attempts to alter original sex is still their original sex, especially psychologically, as explained by Sigmund Freud, Carol Junt, etc.As for the paper...should contain more depth and information for such a current controversial issue. It is easy to read and understand, but room for improvement. Please stop trying to gain points by submitting half-hearted work. That is not what this site is for.
- 01/10/2003
- 20:56:58
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
93%?...Junior College?...essay?If I jump off the moon how long will it take me to reach Mother Earth.
- 01/10/2003
- 20:49:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great job, thorough and informative.
- 01/10/2003
- 20:30:32
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Great plot and choice of characters. Great Work.My suggestions are this: The only introduction the story gives to the characters is that they belong to a pack and they are friends. Perhaps you could try building a broader base, perhaps talk about birth and maybe a bonding experience the two had. You could also add a little more depth to the part when they are referring to "the last time we followed a noise" say that they got in trouble and mention who punished, perhaps like, Papa Tulio, or the pack leader, Wise Turtle.Anyhow..those are my ideas, good luck and good job.
- 01/10/2003
- 20:21:53
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I meant in the U.S., I am not refering to the entire world(referring to the section "minorities...not...being suppressed"...since the authors paper focuses on the U.S.And if you think my comment is innacurate, get a stinkin' life.
- 01/10/2003
- 20:13:57
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I honestly don't believe that black people, or any other minorities for that matter, are being suppresed in one way or another. EQUAL RIGHTS ARE NOT SPECIAL RIGHTS. As for racism, that has been around since the dawn of civilization and cannot be considered as part of any political agenda.
- 30/09/2003
- 20:32:07
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
An informative, thorough, and well-written paper that makes for good research material. Great Job.
- 30/09/2003
- 20:27:02
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While this paper would be slightly complicated for a beginner to understand, nonetheless, it is an informative collection of notes for readers. Good Job.
- 30/09/2003
- 20:23:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Substantial room for more depth. This is an interesting paper that kept me reading, I just wish there was more because it was so interesting and ended adruptly. But overall a fine piece.
- 30/09/2003
- 20:17:13
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper is a great read. Informative and interesting. Great Job.
- 29/09/2003
- 19:12:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
While it is written in a periodical (i.e. magazine) manner...this paper does a good job of covering its topic.
- 24/09/2003
- 18:50:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It already is happening on a small scale. For the critics...go research Eugenics.
- 23/09/2003
- 20:08:58
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Thorough and in depth. This is a well written piece that is an interesting read for anybody. Great Job.
- 23/09/2003
- 18:16:14
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Excellent piece...thorough, informative, and in depth. Accurate portrayal of its chosen topic. Great Job.
- 23/09/2003
- 12:07:24
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great piece...thorough and keeps the reader reading. Good Job.
- 23/09/2003
- 12:02:29
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very "persuasive" paper. Well written and thought out. Good Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 20:43:46
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
If sharpened a litte this paper would make a good editorial. Nonetheless, great topic and gives apt explanation to subject.
- 21/09/2003
- 20:33:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I recently completed the study of this subject and this paper is accurate, clear, and in depth on an increasingly controversial issue. Great Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 20:26:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great paper...excellent depth and detail. A must read for everyone...accurately portrays reality. Excellent Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 20:20:32
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
well written...something all should read who are planning to attend college. Good Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 19:37:17
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Quite informative...this piece answered a lot of questions I had. Thanks.
- 21/09/2003
- 18:29:41
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Great job...I have been wanting to try the sport of paintball for a long time...this is an informative piece.
- 21/09/2003
- 18:20:27
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great job on providing the right information and tying everything in, making a clear picture in the readers mind. Excellent Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 18:14:17
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Great detail and depth. Gives the right amount of information. Good Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 15:59:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Could give the paper a bit more unity and coherence. But, overall an informative piece.
- 21/09/2003
- 15:54:55
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
well written piece. This paper also describes a rampant modern mental epidemic. It is quite true that you cannot judge a book by its cover.
- 21/09/2003
- 15:50:40
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
There is room for grammar improvement but nonetheless it is a good piece. If only more children thought of their parents this way, our world would be a much better place.
- 21/09/2003
- 15:45:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very thorough and well written. Great descriptions. Good Job.
- 21/09/2003
- 14:54:47
- Score: 8 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
Couldn't have said it better myself. This is a strong paper, would make a good editorial.
- 20/09/2003
- 21:33:40
- Score: 19 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
While this paper could do without the typo's it is still quite fun to read.
- 20/09/2003
- 20:16:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
An informative piece of paper that maintains unity throughout the entire length. Good job.
- 20/09/2003
- 19:53:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper is an accurate description of an epidemic problem of the modern era. Would make a good editorial and is good research material.
- 20/09/2003
- 19:37:59
- Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
Great paper...the grade is way to low. Good research material for anybody to read. Good Job.
- 20/09/2003
- 09:22:59
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
A very thorough and excellent piece of work. Good research material and leisure reading.
- 20/09/2003
- 08:39:12
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A very insightful piece of work...A good paper for just about anybody to read.
- 19/09/2003
- 21:05:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
For 685 words this essay is excellent work...Good Job..
- 19/09/2003
- 20:57:53
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Medium work...could be rewritten with more in depth and perhaps examples...(even if theoretical)...
- 19/09/2003
- 20:52:54
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
One of the best papers I have read. Excellent work.
- 19/09/2003
- 18:55:16
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Could further in depth on such a complex subject, but overall a good description of it's subject.
- 19/09/2003
- 18:46:24
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Good topic...but for a twelfth grader there is much room for improvement in in-depth discussion, examples, and possible solutions.
- 19/09/2003
- 18:29:25
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
excellent piece. Quite informative and keeps the reader interested.
- 17/09/2003
- 20:14:11
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great short story, especially for a tenth-grader. Excellent work.
- 17/09/2003
- 06:21:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is good work with helpful information.
- 15/09/2003
- 08:00:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
yeah..I heard of Scarface...what I was talkin' 'bout was an individual...you know...like drugs make a guy do funny things, you know?...sure Scarface was whackin' heads in Chicago..but that don't mean crime was up Hicksville, you know?...but drugs and cosumption of firewater would increase crime rate in Hicksville. So the crime was up in Chicago but not across the board. I know how to read charts too, you know.
- 09/09/2003
- 07:21:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Needs to be streamlined in grammar and go further in depth.
- 07/09/2003
- 19:29:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Overall a normal paper...pretty good insight on the issues. One thing that caught me as funny was this...lack of alcohol "caused" crime in the 20's. I would strongly disagree with this because crime rates climb every year, and it is commonly known that alcohol is a number one cause of violence.I find it disturbing that for some reason the author makes lack of alcohol look bad but fails to inform the reader that in parallel with the increase of drugs in the 80's the crime rate skyrocketed faster than in the 20's.
- 07/09/2003
- 18:42:36
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
An insightful look into a fundamental issue of today's world. Focuses on the subject and is clearly written.
- 07/09/2003
- 18:16:34
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Excellent description of the aftermath of the War of 1812. You stayed on subject and explained it in detail.
- 05/09/2003
- 20:25:31
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Standard.
- 05/09/2003
- 08:57:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Room for minor editing but overall an accurate paper on a dynamic character.
- 05/09/2003
- 08:36:38
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Though it could be slightly streamlined, it is insightful and informative.
- 05/09/2003
- 08:22:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
An interesting paper that makes a good read. But not enough depth or insight. Time travel is a complicated subject that should be tackled only by those willing to devote long amounts of time to research and study.
- 05/09/2003
- 08:16:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great topic and argument...but should go more in depth. This is a controversial issue that requires further insight than given.
- 05/09/2003
- 08:07:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Is luck a factor in baseball?football?basketball?horseracing?hydroplaning?track and field?NO.NO.NO.NO.NO.NO. So why would luck be a factor in Soccer? it is NOT. All sports are based upon an athletes abilities. And team sports are based upon teamwork and morale. If luck was a factor in sports then it would not be sports, it would be a different version of gambling. I would hate to think that all the athletes worldwide who sweat and toil for the chance to realize a lifelong dream would only find out it was based on luck, in other words gambling.Another thing...I can't believe this paper was written by a Junior. It has the format of a 7th or 8th grader. Jeez, read some essays on this site first...and if your paper matches the calibre, then and only then submit your own paper...this is embarrassing.
- 05/09/2003
- 07:38:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Recommend that this paper be rewritten using an outline because it jumps from complex to simple to complex, etc,..
- 05/09/2003
- 07:27:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
When I read the title I assumed it would be much longer because the holocaust is a vast and complicated subject that must have sociology included. The title should be "three main concentration camps during the holocaust" because the persecution of Jews is never delved into, looking at it from a social point of view.
- 03/09/2003
- 18:55:32
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
As someone who is homeschooled, I can say that this paper is very accurate and a strong resource for research.
- 03/09/2003
- 14:47:44
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
wow...an insightful read...I learned something that I had never noticed before. Great Job.
- 03/09/2003
- 14:34:23
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
My dad works in the aerodynamic industry, so maybe because I have a lot of knowledge of the industry that I consider this paper a little dry and shallow.tips...pick a one or two responsibilities of your chosen careers and go in deeper to a day-to-day basis. Then you might conclude by showing how the three relate to each other on the job.Like your chosen careers.
- 03/09/2003
- 14:24:31
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
An insighful piece of work. Good proportion of facts and research. Taught me a thing or two.
- 03/09/2003
- 14:06:27
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Does not deliver the depth expected for such a complex issue. Needs more research, especially in the social aspect of "animal farm" v. soviet russia.Very interesting topic though. Would love to read a revised edition.
- 03/09/2003
- 14:00:36
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Would strongly recommend editing. Reads like a second rough draft. Great research paper...fair amount of supportive facts.
- 03/09/2003
- 13:53:35
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
An informative paper. Good research tool.
- 03/09/2003
- 13:40:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
BRIEF.
- 03/09/2003
- 13:29:15
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The point this paper attempts to make is admirable, but I find it hard to believe that it was written by a 13th grade education. PLEASE improve your sentence structure...I kept "tripping" all the way through. Conjunctions and pronouns need to be employed in your writing more frequently.
- 03/09/2003
- 12:12:04
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
On of the most informative and thorough papers I have ever read. Very insightful and contains an abundace of supportive facts. A must for anyone doing research on the topic. Legislative and Magazine quality.
- 03/09/2003
- 11:41:10
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I agree exactly with what 'ccmustangs2001' and 'bookworm100' say.
- 02/09/2003
- 19:39:31
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
While it lacks to point out negatives that arise from situations related to the topic. It is an informative read that makes a good research item.
- 02/09/2003
- 19:18:04
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper is mainly for Shakespeare readers. The introduction of names of characters without development makes it dry and boring for those who do not read Shakespeare.On a technical note...lack of pronouns and conjunctions adds to the dryness and makes it "choppy".
- 02/09/2003
- 18:41:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
While it could contain a little more technical information it is an insightful paper that is clear and stays on the subject.On a technical note...fair coherence and unity.
- 02/09/2003
- 18:23:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This paper is very educative about a topic that will become extremely pivotal in the near future. While it keeps you reading it is also a good resource. Makes for a debate or editorial.On a technical note...strong unity, coherence, and emphasis.
- 02/09/2003
- 18:13:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A thorough and informative paper. A good resource for leisure review and research. The paper stays focused on its topic and provides in-depth material.On a technical note...although slightly "academic", contains excellent emphasis and unity.
- 02/09/2003
- 15:44:27
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
As someone who is related to men involved in the proceedings described in this essay, it is an accurate paper of chronological and social events. But, it lacks in description and depth of Trotsky's affect socially. Nonetheless it provides the reader with a good technical overview and a strong timetable.On a technical note...while containing good unity,more in-depth of social affects would provide stronger emphasis and made it more complete.
- 02/09/2003
- 15:28:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
An all around strong paper. Makes an excellent introduction to the character.On a technical note...excellent coherence and unity with a proper proportion of emphasis.
- 02/09/2003
- 15:04:21
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This paper takes a controversial issue and makes a very loud statement. For 389 words, it packs a power punch. Well thought out and strongly written. Makings of a great debate or editorial.On a technical note...walks the highwire without a fault.
- 02/09/2003
- 14:53:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The grade on this paper is outrageously low. This paper is a good portrayal of it's topic and quite unbiased, which makes a pleasant read. Although it is slightly lacking in concrete data, for such a vital issue, it remains a good resource for anybody.On a technical note...excellent coherence.
- 02/09/2003
- 14:42:04
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Sorry, I meant "a little better coherence, but very strong unity and emphasis".
- 02/09/2003
- 14:28:54
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
As a major in economics, this paper is research intensive and a good source of information. A clear and accurate portrayal, in simple language, of the overall effects of Monetary Policy.On a technical note to the author...could use a little better coherence, but very strong unity and coherence.
- 02/09/2003
- 14:26:55
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Slightly comical and an amusing read during leisure time.As someone who works in the entertainment industry, this paper greatly lacks depth and investigative quality. It needs more research.On a technical note, choppy reading due to an abundance of very short sentences causes this paper to want in coherence. The short sentences also make me feel "out of breath" because as soon as I start following a thought you end it very concisely and leave me "gasping".
- 02/09/2003
- 14:09:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Excellent.Very thorough and in-depth. Strong research material and makes for a good discussion.On a technical note...excellent unity,coherence, and emphasis.
- 02/09/2003
- 13:53:32
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very thorough and complete.As a major in economics, I would recommend this essay as a research tool to anybody working on Southeast Asia or a model plan.Excellent Work!!!
- 02/09/2003
- 13:39:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great piece of work for anybody to read.
- 02/09/2003
- 12:30:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This great critical review is an excellent read and a great resource.On a technical note...excellent introduction and conclusion. Strong coherence and emphasis.
- 02/09/2003
- 12:22:58
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Great idea but should be re-written. Need to improve on unity, coherence, and make it a little more complete.
- 02/09/2003
- 09:31:07
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
A stimulating read. Makes for a good discussion.
- 02/09/2003
- 09:16:13
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Could have better emphasis. But, excellent unti and coherence. A good recource for research.
- 02/09/2003
- 09:03:40
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
While this essay could contain a little more emphasis, it is an educational work with good unity and coherence.
- 02/09/2003
- 08:51:45
- Score: 15 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
Could develop key issues a little more in-depth. Nevertheless, an informative essay on a vital issues of the Moder Era.
- 02/09/2003
- 08:38:40
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.