I feel that uniforms actually do help make decisions on topics which many students fell are most important, clothing. It does give people an equal opportunity to express individualtiy in another way. I agree with your aspects.
- 18/05/2004
- 13:33:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Excellent essay. Very explanitory details to support you arguments.
- 18/05/2004
- 13:28:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great concept on natural human behavior in society. Good refrences back to the book for characters such as Ralph's reaction and sybolization.
- 18/05/2004
- 13:15:49
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Excellent job on this essay. Very thourogh details explaining this topic. Nice breakdown on how dysfuncition can be defined as well. Very informative.
- 17/05/2004
- 00:45:06
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Meh, well, good information, although much could have been expanded on. Explain more thouroughly.
- 17/05/2004
- 00:40:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great job on this essay. Lot of reaseach invovled. Nice trying to involve the reader as if they were involved in the specific topic.
- 17/05/2004
- 00:36:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice job of using the refrences to describe Eschers' past/overall life.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:47:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice job on stating Locke's position on the political spectrum and describing how he felt about his surroundings. Good comparison of the book/movie "lord of the flies"
- 13/05/2004
- 12:43:38
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think that essay is more of an opinion based article. Need to find a few more factual basis' to understand from. Media often can persuade the facts to lean one way or the other. Try to research a litte further into the assination.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:40:45
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well, I understand what you are trying to state within this work. Try to focus more on the compare/contrast of the typical sterotypical latino and the movie rather than stating the actions and then simply comparing between the two.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:37:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Extensive title. Well put description of women's elabortate fight for equality. Try not to refer to the reader next time. Stick mainly to the facts but be sure to add in your opinion somewhere as well. Give examples like "This demonstated how the women's equality became one step closer." Also, try to add in more how the each process did change the labour movement. Otherwise, good job.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:29:13
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Well, I admit, I'm not much of a fan of middle age litterature and whatnots, but I'd have to say, all-in-all it's pretty good.
- 05/01/2004
- 15:16:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Whoa, nice job. I admit, it is hard to compare such amusement as south park in any other way than childish humor. Great job.
- 05/01/2004
- 15:07:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nice way and good details to state functionalism. Informing.
- 05/01/2004
- 15:02:27
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The overall paper is pretty good, very descriptive, although, to me, it did seem to get a bit confusting at times
- 05/01/2004
- 14:59:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good job although it seems much more of a personal opinion in my eyes. That's alright though, never-the-less an great paper.
- 15/12/2003
- 14:05:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good paper. Great use of personal instances in there to keep up how it is related to today's society and teenagers
- 15/12/2003
- 14:00:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good essay reguarding such things as business ethics and what-nots. Amazingly very well written. Great job
- 15/12/2003
- 13:58:10
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Very descriptive essay. Very informative with good details
- 15/12/2003
- 13:55:09
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Well, it does seem to jump between eras, but it is good. Try to also mention other artists such as Miles Davis and Ella Fitzgerald. Don't lose track, although the european society did have a large infuence on jazz, mention 'field hollars' from the african american society during slavery days. Mention all the forms of other music that evolved from jazz.
- 12/11/2003
- 19:35:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I liked this story very much. It's very well written out and it gives all the readers a feel of how it is to be in your shoes. Great job in this story.
- 12/11/2003
- 19:28:46
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Umm, it was OK although there were many gramatical errors throughout this story. It kinda digresses into something other than what it started out to be.
- 12/11/2003
- 19:25:26
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Good job placing a set of questions. Very descrptive answers to go along with them. Many souces read from shows that much thought was put into this, good job.
- 09/11/2003
- 12:23:44
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Good use of facts of the depression to support the details. Overall, nice way to give examples leading to the causes. Good job, very informative.
- 09/11/2003
- 12:14:09
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Nice use of quotes from the book to support your details. very descriptive.
- 09/11/2003
- 12:09:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good use of quotes and a bibliography to work with it. Nice use of the quotes to support your work.
- 06/11/2003
- 15:59:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well, a not bad essay, although could have been paraphrased a bit better in some points. Overall, a not bad essay with detailed points. Keep it up.
- 31/10/2003
- 16:52:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Not too bad, although it displays trite examples of our society as a whole becoming too economically dependent. Try not to speak of the general public as a whole. Try to narrow it down a little more.
- 20/10/2003
- 13:24:58
- Score: 15 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
Well, not an all bad paper. Good way to compare characters in each story. It is a tad bit too short and somewhat seen from a over-view of the story, but it is good never-the-less.
- 20/10/2003
- 13:06:57
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Not a bad paper on your opinion. Very well supported. Nice use of examples to help cite your stance on it. Keep it up.
- 20/10/2003
- 13:02:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It was an overall, alright lab. It was a bit long, although expected of every lab, but it was just missing a certain element to give it the kick it needed. By the way, the correct spelling is 'sulfur'
- 20/10/2003
- 12:58:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Although it would be somewhat more helpful for both students and teachers, it woul not be much more helpful knowing that more students will have even more time to simply do their own often pointless tasks. e.g. watching t.v., playing computer games... But nice essay though. It was persuasive as promised in the title.
- 15/10/2003
- 19:52:05
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Very well written paper. It does drag on a bit, but overall amazingly well written. Good use of quotes from his past works along with a description of from where it was drawn from. Great job.
- 15/10/2003
- 19:41:55
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good essay. Well supported facts. Overall, a great piece of work. Very well persuaded, mission accomplished.
- 11/10/2003
- 22:28:48
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Overall good paper, although a bit short. It does get a little confusing though.
- 03/10/2003
- 14:55:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Although in my opinion, the essay started of a bit primortial, but it was well played out. It was really amazingly well written, great job, keep up the good work.
- 02/10/2003
- 20:54:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
In my opinion a fairly well wrtten essay with a little room for improvement. It simply has a younger sense of writing to it which can be developed by only naturally. Overall, I liked it, and keep up the writing.
- 05/08/2003
- 21:22:58
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great job with this essay, although in the end it did seem like you were starting to digress into Hitler's power trip. Very well well written though.
- 05/08/2003
- 21:16:08
- Score: 18 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
nice work. This essay clearly states the the unequal fairness of biotechnology very well. Good use of the details to support the overall format of this essay.
- 03/08/2003
- 22:11:17
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
In my opinion, this essay is well written. Although, describe the use oof the quotes (i.e. first paragraph) because they do get fairly confusing. Also, Unless the whole essay is meant to be written as a personal opinion rather than a factual biograpy, try to use such words as 'I,' 'We,' or 'you.' Other than that, great facts. Well thought out sense, and keep it up.
- 01/08/2003
- 21:47:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A well written description about the overall perception of happines. At times does seem a tad bit over-simplified, but as a whole, I'm quite impressed.
- 28/07/2003
- 13:45:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good essay, really gets the true point across that idenity is based more upon how others view us than how we truly see ourselves. Nice work.
- 27/07/2003
- 21:28:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I personally feel that this is a decent article. I like the fact that there is actual past studies added in here. Although, It could use a little more fact based views in it. Overall, fairly decent. Keep up the good work.
- 27/07/2003
- 21:22:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.