Essay was well organized and put together. The data was very descriptive and all the additional statistics really supported your claim. Great Job.
- 04/05/2010
- 17:28:37
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Your essay was well structured. You were exact and to the point avoiding jargon. Grade A work
- 07/11/2009
- 14:59:54
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Your essay is well structured and hits various important points. Grade A work overall!
- 04/11/2009
- 23:28:41
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Great work, love the modern twist to the essay and the impacts it may have
- 18/05/2009
- 18:49:19
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well written, found this article very interesting and definitely to the point!
- 18/05/2009
- 18:48:42
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very interesting read. would like to read more about the history to make the essay stronger
- 18/05/2009
- 17:18:39
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Great read. To strengthen the essay i would suggest adding stats to emphasize how harmful identity theft really is. Also to mention how much of a harm identity theft is not only to citizens, but more so to corporations.
- 26/03/2009
- 00:59:31
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting essay. Very clear thesis statement which was proved throughout. Great overall.
- 26/03/2009
- 00:57:21
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Well written and very enjoyable to read. Essay stresses the need of Research and Development very well!
- 26/03/2009
- 00:54:05
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Very good job on an 8th grade level. To strengthen the essay, i would recommend how juvenile drinking can lead to alcoholism
- 25/03/2009
- 01:19:25
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Good read. Touched on all aspects of topic, well done.Would classify as 11th
- 25/03/2009
- 01:12:41
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Very interesting read. One major thing about HRM today is the outsource of the profession. To make the article stronger I would suggest touching on the benefits of outsourcing HRM especially in today's economy. By outsourcing there will be an improved business focus, more productive use of time and resources, and guidance from experts from across the business spectrum.
- 24/03/2009
- 01:43:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.