Very good piece.
- 11/03/2007
- 12:55:54
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A few grammatical errors, but an overall good, short essay.
- 10/03/2007
- 21:01:37
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is not an essay but a discussion question.
- 09/03/2007
- 14:28:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A little short at 300 words, but the reader gets a general sense of the character.
- 09/03/2007
- 10:43:35
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Very nice, flowed easy and showed deep meaning.
- 04/03/2007
- 12:50:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I thought this was a good essay, however the conclusion could have been more developed.
- 04/03/2007
- 12:43:27
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Ok essay, but missing a conclusion.
- 04/03/2007
- 12:06:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Poor grammar and punctuation.
- 26/01/2007
- 06:18:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A good narrative.
- 20/01/2007
- 11:32:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I wish I could say this was a good analysis, but it just doesn't hit home. You effectively let the reader know that you love the song and it is powerful to you, but you don't carry it through enough to make the reader understand why.
- 13/01/2007
- 14:01:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nice job and very informative.
- 13/01/2007
- 13:44:01
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Too many grammatical mistakes
- 13/01/2007
- 13:39:48
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good essay overall, but there are some problems with spelling and grammer.
- 13/01/2007
- 13:33:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Short, sweet, informative.
- 13/01/2007
- 13:26:40
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Wow, a lot of information in so little words.
- 13/01/2007
- 13:16:48
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nice analysis. My only suggestion is that you could have included a more thoughful anaylsis of verse 7.
- 13/01/2007
- 13:12:49
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good job! Nice analysis, very thought provoking.
- 13/01/2007
- 13:03:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent essay. Very well written and helps the reader to understand these two diseases.
- 13/01/2007
- 12:58:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
What stood out to me was inconsistencies in the number of "myths" - the author writes there are "many myths" and "Every religion and every culture in the world seems to have its own creation myth" and then writes about "All four creation stories".
- 16/12/2006
- 14:18:14
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You presented the facts well, however introduced new topics in the conclusion that I thought could have been better developed.
- 16/12/2006
- 14:04:37
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Nicely written and brings up valid points. Expanding on alternatives would have been nice, but there's only so much information that can go into a 1,000 word paper.
- 22/10/2006
- 11:50:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Powerful!
- 15/10/2006
- 11:08:37
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good essay. A tough topic which you handled well.
- 15/10/2006
- 10:56:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The author did a good job in briefly summarizing his interpretation of this painting.
- 12/08/2006
- 22:35:03
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
It was really hard for me to get past all the fragmented sentences and grammatical errors. I think this could have been a good paper had more effort been put into it.
- 12/08/2006
- 22:29:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a classic story, and I think the author did a fine job summarizing. I appreciate that an 8th grader can understand and see how this story can be compared with today's problems.
- 11/08/2006
- 18:14:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I agree with Krezay, the author should have mentioned Sarb-Ox. Also, the essay didn't really talk about how accountants are changing their image.
- 11/08/2006
- 18:08:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good paper, clearly written and concise, however I noticed a lack of references.
- 30/07/2006
- 10:31:27
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well written and persuasive. The author leaves much food for thought.
- 30/07/2006
- 10:20:39
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I didn't care for the way this essay was structured, and don't think that the use of first person is appropriate for the subject.
- 30/07/2006
- 09:43:18
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nicely done. Hits well on the four functions and explains them clearly.
- 30/07/2006
- 09:09:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well written and provides a lot of detail.
- 30/07/2006
- 09:03:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Excellent analysis and thoroughly done.
- 27/07/2006
- 19:00:53
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well put for how short the essay/memo was written. A lot of info in a compact assignment.
- 23/07/2006
- 12:03:35
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You addressed each concept in the simulation in a short, yet precise manner. I would have ellaborated more on the Application of Learning to Workplace, I don't understand how you are comparing "learning by doing" to comparaive advantage.
- 23/07/2006
- 11:39:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.