good essay but i don't really a clear thesis
- 15/05/2005
- 00:14:45
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
wow good essay, i never knew sleep deprivation was an illness. You did an excellent job on the essay and it's very interesting!
- 11/05/2005
- 23:51:37
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
thanks for the comment . i will try to revised my essay more carefully next time
- 11/05/2005
- 23:41:09
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Cloning is a very good thing, but the media has only show the negative image of it. It is this kind of ignorance that will stop us from new discoveries that will make life better.
- 12/04/2005
- 19:33:47
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
wow, your essay is very well written! shows that you did a lot of research. i like how your essay is very in-depth
- 30/03/2005
- 00:43:05
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
your essay isn't what I thought it would be, the title doesn't really go with it. i though it would be more about the decision and the effect but it was more about creating the bomb. overall it's very good and interesting about how the bomb is created.
- 15/03/2005
- 21:55:44
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
good paper but you didn't have many facts to back up your opinions
- 15/03/2005
- 21:28:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
a few grammatical errors but over all it's a good paper.
- 03/03/2005
- 17:47:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
very good essay, it flows very well.
- 03/03/2005
- 17:45:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good essay but I see no clear thesis. Next time try working on your thesis before you finish the essay.
- 03/03/2005
- 17:42:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very interesting... i like how you open up about the history of the bomb, but also i didn't see a clear thesis.
- 03/03/2005
- 17:38:37
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
you did a great job on this essay, it really shows that you have done your research!!!!! good job! :)
- 03/03/2005
- 17:36:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this all sounds like just a summary, next time try to put some of your thoughts in it, but overall it's good.
- 03/03/2005
- 17:28:56
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
did you think you can get away w/ this???? copying from sparknotes?? shame shame shame....http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/ageofinnocence/context.htmlhttp://www.sparknotes.com/lit/ageofinnocence/summary.html
- 02/03/2005
- 23:17:05
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
next time try to put your essay in paragraphs!
- 02/03/2005
- 23:05:23
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
good essay, plagiarism is the one thing that i cannot stand, and today i've check out so many essay that has been plagiarized. it's sad to say that a lot of the essay on cheathouse are plagiarized!
- 01/03/2005
- 22:57:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
why is this essay on another webpage? here's the site http://www.directessays.com/viewpaper/6472.html
- 01/03/2005
- 22:53:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i don't think you wrote this essay because i found it on another sitehere's the sitehttp://www.midtermpapers.com/20465.htm
- 01/03/2005
- 22:46:15
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i don't really know if you wrote this essay or not but there's another copy of this on another website. I hope you didn't plagiarized like other people. here's the sitehttp://papercamp.com/r9.shtml
- 01/03/2005
- 22:38:34
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
6th plagiarized piece by you.http://www.greenspirit.org.uk/resources/CosmologyandCulture.htm
- 01/03/2005
- 21:14:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good work, your essay is very intersting and informative!
- 01/03/2005
- 02:25:54
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
good essay, but you plagiarize a few sentences,here and there. plagiarizing is wrong period even if it's just a sentence. you can get in a lot of trouble in college if you do that. so next time you can take the idea but put it in different word and you also need to give the author credit
- 21/02/2005
- 21:23:23
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good essay, i have also wrote an essay on abortion before but it is not as detailed as yours. I agree with some of your opinion, but overall i am anti abortion. i believe that it should be illegal, because it is the killing of another human being.
- 20/02/2005
- 23:37:00
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i understand why you got that 60% because the teacher probably knew you plagiarized!!!! this is so sad!!!!!! people like you should be expell!
- 20/02/2005
- 23:27:35
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
*sniff* *sniff* how touching. very creative!
- 20/02/2005
- 23:23:32
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is very well written, shows that you did your research. child labor, a very interesting topic that more people need to know about.
- 20/02/2005
- 18:12:05
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
your essay about democracy has helped me so much in writing my essay. your essay is totally awesome! keep up the good work!
- 17/02/2005
- 19:34:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
your essay is good but you didn't do a very good job introducing it. you just went straight into the point. next time you write, try to put some background information in first about the topic that you are writing about
- 17/02/2005
- 18:22:15
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
wow, is this true? i have never heard about this!
- 17/02/2005
- 18:19:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i can see a lot of plagirism in your essay. students that are in 11th grade usually don't use words that you have used in your essay. i'm in college and i don't even know what one of the word means. overall it is an okay essay. you should start citing your work and add some more length to it.
- 17/02/2005
- 01:38:54
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
wow your analysis of plato's work has really helped me a lot in my essay w/ the comparison between plato's philosophy on government and other philospher like machiavelli and kautilya.
- 17/02/2005
- 01:30:36
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
wow good essay! i love it how you were talking to the audience but you didn't use the word "you" .
- 11/02/2005
- 19:07:31
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
wow, that was totally amazing!!!!!!! you almost had me in tears!!!!! wow you are so talented! good job on physical description. all i have to say is WOW!
- 10/02/2005
- 20:02:18
- Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
good essay, but kind of too opinionated, not many things to back it up. Also you shouldn't address the reader.
- 10/02/2005
- 19:58:37
- Score: 12 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
wow your essay is really good, you have some really good points!! I do believe that it is an addiction and not an disease.
- 09/02/2005
- 16:19:34
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
your essay has a good point backing up your title and I agree that's true but that's just nasty! man and a man woman and a woman. we were created for man and woman
- 09/02/2005
- 16:14:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very good essay. i think overall all religion are similar in a way.
- 08/02/2005
- 18:41:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i love your thesis statement!!!! you have really good points supporting your opinion about why selling people is wrong. You also did a great job on the conclusion.
- 01/02/2005
- 09:06:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
your essay is very interesting. i totally agree with you, dreaming is an very interesting subject. it's funny how i dream all the time but when I wake up i can never seem to remember what i was dreaming about. do you know if they have done some research on this subject?
- 27/01/2005
- 17:28:35
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this seems like notes more than an essay. you really need to work on the length. there is a lot of things you can write about taxonomy so you need to input more information in your essay.
- 27/01/2005
- 16:58:46
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Excellent essay! You have very strong points in your essay. I do believe that is is human nature that causes war. Your grammer is very good and excellent choice in wording!!
- 27/01/2005
- 16:54:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
wow, you really impress me with your choice of words. You seem to be really talented in writing. The structure of your essay is very good, it keep me interested.
- 26/01/2005
- 18:54:33
- Score: 39 out of 48 people found this comment useful.
wow your essay is very good, i didn't know all that about assisted suicide. your essay really goes deep into the subject. good job!!!! keep up w/ the good work! :)
- 26/01/2005
- 18:35:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
wow your essay is so good, you really have some good ideas about marchiavelli's work, the prince.
- 26/01/2005
- 18:15:37
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
wow, your essay is pretty good, i say you deserve better than a 89%. Your wordings are very good but you have left some of the sentences out. Overall your essay is very good!
- 14/01/2005
- 16:56:34
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this essay is very poorly written, no clear thesis, and doesn't have enough supporting points
- 01/12/2004
- 19:41:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
wow, your essay is very good, you did everything correctly, you are the few ones that cite your source.
- 29/11/2004
- 18:35:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i really like your thesis statement, it really focus on the point that you are trying to make. I do think that literacy is important. without literacy there cannot be a good change
- 29/11/2004
- 18:21:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
your essay is very good, it really shows that you did research, but the problem is you don\'t have enough reasons support why the electric car is a great invention. i really like your conclustion.
- 28/11/2004
- 19:17:31
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
your essay is very good. you had the basic 5 paragraph and didn't have that much grammatical errors.
- 28/11/2004
- 19:09:02
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this is a good essay but it seems more like a report to me.it also show plagirism too.
- 28/11/2004
- 18:37:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
ooh, i see a lot of plagirism. the least you can do is give them the credit and you didn't even do that. i can't really clearly see the thesis statement. you need to start writing 5 paragraph essays. you would make a much better grade if you did.
- 26/11/2004
- 18:17:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
your essay is just plain confusing!!!!!!! a lot of grammatical errors and not very good word choice
- 26/11/2004
- 18:08:34
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
your wording are really weird... it is very easy to misunderstand because of your wordings. no wonder you got that grade. your essay is only one paragraph. you need to make it at least 5 paragraph w/ the introduction , 3 supporting body paragraph, and a conclustion. i'm not trying to criticize your work, but i'm just telling you what you need to work on to make a better grade next time.
- 26/11/2004
- 17:56:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
you have too many grammatical error in this essay. It looks like you didn't even care to proofread or revise it. your wordings are kind of weak. I found so many errors just reading the first paragraph.
- 26/11/2004
- 17:50:36
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
good essay but you need to work on the wording and the conclusion. really shows that you did research on this. you need to start citing things or else it'll be plagirism. if you don't start now then when you reach college it will be a wide awakening because they want you to cite all the information that you got from others
- 17/11/2004
- 19:49:32
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
good essay but you seem to have spelling problem and by reading your essay, i can see that you did some research. You used the information but you fail to cite it. In my english class the professor would automatically given me an F if i didn't cite anything. but in other words your content is good
- 16/11/2004
- 19:36:00
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
very good essay but i think it is totally false. the main reason there is poverty in the united states is laziness. How can you be poor in the united states? this is the place where you can achieve anything if you tried. i don't think welfare is helping the numbers because those that are on welfare will remain to stay on it because they don't want to get a job because if they did then they would lose it. then they would have to actually work for their money. not to offend anybody, but this is just how i see it.
- 16/11/2004
- 19:20:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i really like your essay, very good word choices.
- 16/11/2004
- 19:13:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this isn't even a essay
- 06/10/2004
- 19:33:58
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
your essay is very good.
- 27/09/2004
- 20:09:56
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
good essay but you need to change the title, when i read the title i though you were doing a paper about war and not the bourne supremacy
- 15/09/2004
- 19:54:23
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I totally disagree w/ your opinion about if a person was in a good environment than they would do better than people who are not in a good environment. People who are doesn't have it all should do better because they want a better life and they should strive for it but the reason that they are not because they are lazy. It's as simple as that.
- 15/09/2004
- 19:47:50
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is not a very effective essay. It's too short, seems more like a report about him than an essay.
- 14/09/2004
- 21:48:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
wow, your essay is really good, i really like the examples, but i don\'t agree on your opinion, i think that abortion is killing an innocent unborn child. I really like the vocabulary you use in here
- 13/09/2004
- 19:53:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.