You should brush up on your grammar, there are several obvious mistakes. Also, you didn't introduce Deng, which I believe to be Deng Xiao Peng.
- 01/11/2007
- 15:07:10
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Nice work, greatly said...
- 26/03/2006
- 01:13:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Although I have never been thru a situation like this before, i do sympathize... The approach of your essay is such that I can see myself at present whilst reading your story... Great job...
- 16/09/2004
- 23:22:19
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Really great poem with a sad ending... Makes people think twice before they do anything.... Absolutely superb...
- 16/09/2004
- 05:07:16
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Interesting piece of work.... Well done...
- 16/09/2004
- 04:15:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well done piece of poem... Present peoples with a wider perception on others beauty by not being judgmental based on looks single-handedly.... Great Job!!!
- 16/09/2004
- 04:13:48
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Just makes us appreciate our parents more for their contributions and sacrifices... Great piece of work... Keep it up !!!
- 16/09/2004
- 03:58:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This poem is so touching.....Great job!!!
- 16/09/2004
- 03:20:37
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The stories you write are interesting and funny... Both essays are unique in their own ways... Sorta like Harry Potter... Great job!!!
- 16/09/2004
- 02:44:06
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This story is interesting....Your definitely one of a kind... Short and Interesting.... Keep up the good work!!! Looking forward to read more stories like this....
- 16/09/2004
- 02:37:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Overall its a well answered question but some analysis added and more information references would make it more convincing.... keep up the good work!!!
- 09/09/2004
- 07:36:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Unbelievable.....very interesting and realistic indeed.. Battle of the evils..... keep up the good job!!! well done piece of work....
- 09/09/2004
- 05:43:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Facinating that you could make a simple game of hide and seek into such a great story with suspense added..... great essay is i might say...
- 09/09/2004
- 05:32:21
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
this is a good essay but there is a lack of some information...itd b more interestin if it was alot longer and more information was given to support ur points....overall good essay....
- 31/08/2004
- 07:42:25
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
good insight on abortion... interesting if i might say....
- 01/08/2004
- 05:30:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this story is great..really emotional... keep up d good work...
- 17/06/2004
- 20:47:53
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this story is great..it is so true many people dont know what they are getting themselves into thru the net... great job keep it up...
- 11/06/2004
- 03:26:04
- Score: 16 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
a well written piece of work... keep up d good work
- 08/06/2004
- 03:54:41
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
this story is very interesting also very descriptive...well done
- 29/05/2004
- 01:25:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting and descriptive story... Interesting interpretations of the greek gods...
- 25/05/2004
- 21:02:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.