I am currently in the third [and final] year of studying for my Bachelor of Laws. I must say that this essay has a lot of valuable information concerning Natural Law, especially for someone like myself who has to study jurisprudence and legal theory. Excellent (though it would have been nice if you had expanded a bit on legal positivism which stands in complete contrast with natural law). :) But I really can't complain anyway. Keep up the good work.
- 26/09/2008
- 05:56:50
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This story was pretty strange....but I loved it! I could almost "see" it in my head. Even though I'm almost 19 years old, Jimmy Neutron is one of my favourite shows. (It's always good to be in touch with your inner child. lol). Nice story. I truly enjoyed it.
- 19/07/2005
- 12:10:53
- Score: 9 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Indeed the internet can be both beneficial and dangerous. This is an excellent essay. The layout is simply perfect. I especially like the way you placed each point under a distinctive heading. That way it's a lot easier to read.Great work! Keep it up.
- 18/07/2005
- 16:07:57
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You're analysis of physical health was quite good and very detailed. That aspect of work health was covered completely, more or less. However, I would have liked to read more about workers' mental and emotional health. That's pretty important too. An individual cannot function properly if he/she is not of a sound disposition. Good work though. I truly enjoyed reading it.
- 15/05/2005
- 10:37:28
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
No one can truly explain what true love is with the use of words. It is something which blows your mind....something that has the ability to change many things. It makes the world go round, so to speak.I really enjoyed reading this essay. It seems oddly poetic. Keep up the wonderful work.
- 15/05/2005
- 10:16:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I have always personally thought that no one should have the right to play God. Cloning is messing with the circle of life. It's nothing short of WRONG!Great essay. Just because we have new technology in the world today, it doesn't mean that we should use it to mess around with nature and humankind.
- 14/05/2005
- 11:58:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think this approach of dealing with bullying may be very effective. Many school children are either victims of bullying or bullies themselves. This problem, I believe, has escalated over the years. The children of today need to learn the true value of ethics and morals.Super essay.
- 14/05/2005
- 09:36:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very dear friend of mine is homosexual and he faces discrimination everyday. He almost lost his life a few years ago when some very ridiculous men decided it would be fun to jump up and down on his chest. I do believe, homosexuals are humans too and deserve respect as well. It was never their choice to be the way they are.
- 14/05/2005
- 09:31:05
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is simply beautiful. In the world today, there are many people who are afraid of death and the process of dying. This poem seems oddly comforting and I'm sure it will change the minds of those who are afraid. Great work!
- 13/05/2005
- 18:43:31
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Cool poem. It has almost perfect timing and is rather legible. For some reason, it reminds me of the life of a teenager, don't you think? The ending was very good to....when you went indepth into the different aspects and the poem...its structure and what not.Great work!
- 29/04/2005
- 06:37:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Ecstasy and any other behaviour-altering drug should be handled with care (or not handled at all). Great essay! However, this is just a minor suggestion. Probably you should start the word "Ecstasy" with a capital E instead of common. It was a bit confusing. But that's it. All in all, this was quite an enjoyable and informative read.
- 28/04/2005
- 11:28:37
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Excellent work, indeed. Quite indepth and legible. Teen suicide is a very disturbing epidemic and should be dealt with accordingly and quickly. Teenagers are the adults of tomorrow. Keep working...I would definitely like to read more of your work.
- 28/04/2005
- 11:23:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I've only got two piercings (soon to be three) in each ear. That's enough for me. lol. But yes...I think tattoos are really cool (even though some people definitely overdo it). As for body modification...I love my body just the way it is but I won't judge anyone who wants to improve the look of a certain body part. It may increase their confidence and boost their self-esteem.Great essay in most parts. Indepth explanations about the different types of body modification. However, the conclusion can use a little work. In some places you seem to be repeating yourself. That is a bit redundant. Great work nonetheless!
- 27/04/2005
- 18:56:31
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I have always thought, a person cannot be sufficiently treated for depression with medication alone. He/She must have the support of loved ones, friends and family as well.Good essay! I especially liked the way in which you went into such detail to fully describe the symptoms of the different kinds of depression. This can be used as an excellent study guide.
- 27/04/2005
- 18:35:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I am also a Catholic and the Bible itself says, "An eye for an eye..." But I really must agree with you...a life sentence would be a lot more painful than the death penalty. That way, the criminal would be able to sit in a cell for the rest of his life and contemplate on his crime. Good work!
- 24/04/2005
- 08:31:55
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I liked this essay as it taught me many things that I didn't know previously. To tell you the truth, I cannot really see anything wrong with it. It flows well and the conclusion is pretty good. However, just one thing. Since this is a college sophomore essay, I would have liked to read more.
- 24/04/2005
- 08:27:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very well-done essay which flows well in most parts and is very legible and easy to understand. However, though most people associate peer presure with adolescents and teens, it does not occur within these age groups alone. Adults can also be victims of peer pressure.Anyway....you keep up the good work!
- 18/04/2005
- 18:17:40
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Indeed, juveniles should not be tried as adults. Most of the time they are not to blame for their undisciplined behaviour. A negative home environment and improper adult supervision and socialization are the main causes of juvenile delinquency and crime.This essay has many strong arguments to support your thesis. However, I would have liked to see more incidents of citing to support some of your arguments. Yet, all in all, this is excellent work!
- 16/04/2005
- 11:54:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It is indeed sad how the standard of beauty has diminished over the years. I'm 5'8" and 120 pounds and I am very proud of my size.This summary was well-done and it fully explains the moral and ethical concerns expressed in "Too Close to the Bone." It flows well and both the introduction and conclusion are well-done as well.
- 16/04/2005
- 11:48:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You were correct about the part that a nation state is created by six bonds. However, I seriously think that your description of Nationalism itself (the first line of the essay) was rather vague. Nationalism is more or less a shared ideology of the peoples of a particular nation...a sense of belonging to a particular nation or the aspiration to form a nation-state where everyone shares at least one (but preferably all) of the six bonds. Your essay was not explained enough. The idea of Nationalism is a very broad topic and believe me, it deserves a lot more than just 329 words.
- 15/04/2005
- 17:47:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I remember looking at that case on a television programme once and thinking to myself, why do people in high society get special treatment from the authorities. It's more than unfair...it's cruel.Anyway...I really enjoyed reading this essay. Great work!
- 15/04/2005
- 14:34:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I can see many grammatical errors and your conclusion is somewhat confusing. From the way you said, ..."premise 2" I figured that you had something further to say.However, I must admit, I understand what you are trying to say but I suggest that you learn to put your points across more legibly.Good effort.
- 15/04/2005
- 14:18:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
There are a few grammatical errors and some words and phrases are used out of context. However, this essay conveys a lot of emotion and you write quite passionately. The way you write just pulls me into this story. Good work!
- 11/04/2005
- 17:14:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The layout of this essay is quiet good and the use of rhetorical questions add a touch of the ethical and moral issues attached to racism.Being of mixed race, I am proud that my ancestors were open minded enough to condone interracial marriages.Great work!! I just wanted to point out to you....Instead of saying separation, you could have use the term "racial segregation." Keep up the good work.
- 11/04/2005
- 17:08:59
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Though no form of government is truly flawless, dictatorship is indeed, the worst type of government. This can be proven by merely taking a look at the past and paying attention to the outcomes of a number of dictators. For eg, The Ancien Regime, Nazism, Fascism, Tsarism.Good work indeed. This is very very detailed. It took me a while to read it but it was worth it because of all the knowledge I subsequently obtained. Thumbs up!
- 10/04/2005
- 18:01:27
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I can see that you put some effort into writing this essay. There's a valid point here and there within. However, considering how broad this topic is, maybe you should write a little more. The issue of further education is quite complex. You could have listed more arguments.
- 10/04/2005
- 10:11:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent biography of Adolf Hitler. I like the way you spoke about almost all of the important events and people in his lifetime. Super essay. I could not have done it better.
- 08/04/2005
- 18:11:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good enough essay but it would have been even better if you had given a lot more detail on the themes used by Wordsworth in his poems. Themes like religion, nature, family. As I said, good enough work but there is still room for improvement.
- 06/04/2005
- 15:42:25
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This personality disorder is rather sad, if you ask me. It reminds me a bit of a sociopath due to the fact that sufferers of both illnesses do not interact well with other people. However, a sociopath is different because he/she actually targets individuals to gain a sense of power. They do not have a conscience.Anyway....I am rambling. lol. Super essay. It is quite indepth and rather fascinating. I'm sure it will make readers take a closer look at their friends and family, in order to find anyone who may suffer from this disorder.
- 06/04/2005
- 15:37:11
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Some rather fascinating reading. I rather enjoyed this essay and could not help but be amazed by the fact that there could be another outbreak of smallpox. It's good to see that you also cited. That way, you've got proof for all the conclusions you come to. Good work!
- 06/04/2005
- 15:24:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't really understand this. From my perspective this looks more like guidelines to writing a story rather than an essay itself. It needs work.
- 03/04/2005
- 10:07:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The other user's comment reminds me a bit of Feng Shui. This essay is pretty good but I think you should have a little more detail. Especially more detail about your personal feelings. Keep on trying!
- 03/04/2005
- 09:16:51
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good essay about eating disorders. More information about the diseases themselves could have been included. However, it was very informative all the same.One thing though. Obesity is not caused merely by overactive eating. A person can become obese if he/she suffers from a glandular problem.Keep working!
- 30/03/2005
- 11:47:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good essay in most parts. However, I was slightly troubled by the use of the word "Minorities." It seems a bit harsh. Probably the better word to use is "immigrants."Good work.
- 30/03/2005
- 11:40:47
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't see anything here about the death penalty? It was a good essay though. However, I think you may need to rephrase the title. It is a bit misleading.Good effort.
- 29/03/2005
- 18:50:27
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was a good effort to write about the sinking of the Titanic from a passenger's point-of-view. It is a pity that the majority of people who died were in the third-class section.Anyway...good work. Keep trying!
- 28/03/2005
- 18:03:18
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think teens are a bit too young to be taking birth control. It is an unnatural process. What they need to be taught is the importance of abstaining.Good essay nonetheless. Even though I disagree with your view, everyone is entitled to their own opinions, right? Nice flowing essay you have there with a lot of citing and an extended bibliography. Good work!
- 23/03/2005
- 19:01:29
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This particular essay says a lot about the novel. It's quite detailed, interesting and I like the way you included various quotes to support your points. However, you left out the major factor of the book. I really think you should have included information on the three ghosts portrayed and their importance, i.e. The ghost of Christmas past, the ghost of Christmas present and the one of the future.Good work nonetheless. Enjoyable reading. :)
- 23/03/2005
- 12:26:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very nice descriptive essay. The imagery is outstanding and it creates a sort of vivid painting within my mind. Keep up the great work!
- 23/03/2005
- 12:20:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It is a pity that racism even exists. I think it is proof of how foolish and unintelligent mankind can be. Wasn't Dwight Yorke subject to racism during a football game one time?Anyway...this essay surely is detailed and you put a lot of effort into it. You cited throughout and your bibliography is quite extended. Good work!
- 22/03/2005
- 17:06:20
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is clearly a case of discrimination. However, I would have liked to see more explanations of discrimination, rather than an example of it. Good effort.
- 21/03/2005
- 09:17:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I found a few sentences to be a bit vague. Also, you mentioned beforehand that you were going to speak of the differences between Lowland and Mountain Gorillas. I didn't see that anywhere. I just saw a general overview of gorillas.Anyway...the essay was still rather interesting. If you had written more about the differences between the two types of gorillas, it would have been even more interesting. Good try.
- 21/03/2005
- 09:10:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It's amazing how there is a complete turn-around at the end of the essay. From darkness and despair to faith and hope. This essay makes me feel grateful for what I have. Good work!
- 21/03/2005
- 08:59:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The aspect of this poem which I really admired was its somewhat direct tone. The only way to convince people that drugs are not the way to go, is to tell them like it is.Good work!
- 13/03/2005
- 08:09:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This short piece contains some very valid and reliable points. However, this is too short and abrupt. Expansion and more detail is needed. Here you are merely summarizing a few points.Keep trying!
- 12/03/2005
- 09:08:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Here you are more or less speaking about the proper upbringing and socialization of a child, am I right?This truly is a good essay and a helpful set of guidelines for new or soon to be parents. Good work!
- 12/03/2005
- 09:05:38
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have to admit, this essay is even better than essays written by certain individuals in their first year of college. Very good work! However, probably I missed it but did you mention the importance of industrialisation as well? The role it played in causing WWI? Probably I missed it.Anyway....good work!
- 11/03/2005
- 14:33:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think the phrase "ignorance is bliss" is not entirely right. However, it is not entirely wrong either. Sometimes what you don't know cannot hurt you. Sometimes ignorance is indeed a blessing.Good essay. The grammar and paragraphing are very good. The essay is fluent and interesting.
- 08/03/2005
- 15:58:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It makes you wonder...All the different denominations, all the religious beliefs, the practices and habits. Who is the true God? And what is his religion? A lot of mystery there!
- 05/03/2005
- 17:53:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A few of the things Hitler did were legal, I admit...such as his move to centralize all aspects of German government, social life and its economy. However, most of what he did was for the benefit of the National Socialist German Workers' Party. Countless people were murdered (make reference to the Holocaust and The Night of the Long Knives.) The negativity overshadows the positivity because every time he actually did something legal, something illegal also went hand in hand with it.You are entitled to your own opinions. I just could not help adding my two cents. Your essay was placed in an understandable and fluent way, though the conclusion could use some work.
- 05/03/2005
- 17:17:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an interesting poem, I must say. It's full of emotion and it is extremely straight-forward (no exaggeration). I'll applaud you because I would have difficulty being this brave!
- 05/03/2005
- 12:57:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a nice argumentative essay. I must say, the grammar and vocabulary that is used is quite excellent for someone in the 9th grade. Good work indeed!
- 04/03/2005
- 18:13:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I am sorry but I did not really understand a few things about this essay. First of all, it does not have an appropriate title. Secondly, why is it placed under "Area & Country Studies"? And lastly, what exactly was your storyline. I'm not saying that the essay is bad or anything like that...I am just saying that you should change a few things about it.Good work, to some extent.
- 04/03/2005
- 18:01:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay. You clearly describe the major factors that make up these religions. However, I personally think that conflict has arisen between these religions mainly because of the role the media plays.Good work though!
- 03/03/2005
- 08:28:29
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I must admit...there are a few valid points in this piece of writing. However, it is definitely too short. A LOT more detail is needed for this to be a reliable source of information. Keep trying.
- 28/02/2005
- 18:48:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nicely written analysis of a story. The amount of information and its value is astounding. I seriously suggest that you keep up the great work!
- 28/02/2005
- 18:41:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very nice work. It's well-formatted, rather interesting and quite powerful. Racial discrimination is never an easy issue but I'm glad that you chose to speak about it. I am lucky enough to live in a country where racism is virtually non-existent.
- 28/02/2005
- 18:36:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Actually, personally my favourite part was the part where you talked about boys. I get the feeling that there is a deeper meaning to that phrase. Nice, flowing poem. Loved it.
- 25/02/2005
- 16:25:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You were off to such a good start. Why did you stop? I would have liked to read a lot more.
- 25/02/2005
- 16:20:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Even though this is a bit short and ends aruptly, I won't judge you. I believe that creative writing is an expression of the feelings of the writer. However, if you had written this with the use of imagery and less basic words, it would have gotten a lot more attention.Nice though. I liked it.
- 25/02/2005
- 16:17:19
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good enough essay, though I find the conclusion to be more abrupt rather than succinct.Everything else was well-explained and analyzed.
- 25/02/2005
- 16:08:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay is too short and does not necessarily contain reliable information. However, since you are not from an English speaking country, I will not criticise. You honestly tried!
- 25/02/2005
- 14:30:42
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your paragraphing and English is good enough. However, in order to write a truly interesting and captivating essay, you first have to come up with a story-line. This is just a bit too amazing and unbelievable for people to truly pay attention to it.Good effort though. Unlike most people I can see that you actually tried.
- 25/02/2005
- 14:23:56
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I personally think that many people cut themselves because they want to feel pain. The sensation of pain shows an individual that what they are going through is real. Pain brings you back to reality.Your essay was very interesting and somewhat, entrancing reading. Quite good!
- 22/02/2005
- 17:59:10
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I initially thought that this was a rather unusual thesis for a paper. However, while reading it I could actually see the logic in your study. This is some very interesting and unique stuff. Good work! I couldn't have done it better.
- 20/02/2005
- 11:29:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your poem never cease to amaze me. I love poetry but mostof my poems are rather straight-forward and they rhyme. Readers truly have to "put on their thinking caps", so to say, to correctly analyse your poems.Excellent work!
- 19/02/2005
- 18:13:55
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay was quite enjoyable. I really like the conclusion. It is rather straight-forward and is a perfect summary of the novel. I read it a few times myself and find that Victorian literature-though it goes way over the heads of many people-is very romantic, so to say.Good work!
- 19/02/2005
- 18:03:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You must have a lot of time on your hands. What is this supposed to be?
- 19/02/2005
- 13:45:06
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
In my opinion, I seriously think that your English has improved greatly. Hey! I know people who come from English-speaking societies who can't write English as well as you do. Usually, I say that essay are supposed to be a lot longer. However, since you're still in the process of improvement, I'll let you off.Keep working! You're certainly getting somewhere.
- 19/02/2005
- 13:39:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is quite good...and unique. You must admit, it isn't something an individual would usually think of writing about. However, in your introduction, you could have probably started by defining "uncertainty" in more scientific terms, i.e. by looking in a dictionary. Only then, to make things easier, you could have stated a few of the things which make dying people uncertain of themselves and/or the environment. To me, your conclusion was quite good. It doesn't need any changing. Good!
- 19/02/2005
- 13:25:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The emotion within this poem is quite strongly expressed. I personally enjoyed this a great deal. Also, I had no difficulty reading it (though I'm myopic) because it was typed in capitals. lol!Good work! :)
- 18/02/2005
- 18:57:19
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Of course I believe that the economic measures were put into place to prepare Germany for war. Hitler always yearned for total control. Remember the Germans had the strong militarist beliefs of the Prussians for more than a century. War and force were their main initiatives. War and fierce industrialisation were their ways of gaining territory and also of defending Blut und Boden (Blood and Soil).The above was just my two cents but overall, your essay contained a lot of information. It was both enjoyable and understandable. Very very good!
- 18/02/2005
- 16:04:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The fact that a child will want to commit suicide is a rather disturbing subject indeed. However, you can only understand why when you really look at and study the life of an adolescent. It is one of the most difficult and complex stages in an individual's life.This essay is very indepth and well researched. Your information is excellent!
- 17/02/2005
- 18:26:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I noticed that you wrote..."It is the only way to communicate..." From my point of view, I gathered that you were talking about verbal language. Therefore, I disagree with that line. Language isn't the only way in which the communicate. If someone is mute, their physical movements may be deemed as a form of communication.Anyway...the rest of your essay was really interesting. I truly enjoyed it and it is somewhat inspiring. Only that line bothered me a bit. Good work though!!
- 17/02/2005
- 17:46:09
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a nice, little essay. It's a very good way of describing the everyday life of someone who is a stickler for routine...even on the days when the routine should be a bit different. Very good!N.B. - However, the ending bothered me a bit. It was a little dry.
- 16/02/2005
- 14:48:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Finding a reliable source of info is rather easy. Search for Wikipedia online encyclopedia and you'll find wonderful information.
- 16/02/2005
- 14:41:49
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This two illnesses are so very complex...why is this so short? The structure of this essay should be a lot more advanced because there are so many things to describe about one disease alone, much less the both of them. You should seriously consider revising this. You should, on top of all, cite from reliable sources.However, the little information contained here is a bit viable, though it is not solid enough.Keep trying!
- 16/02/2005
- 14:39:26
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is very beautiful. You don't really have to improve it anymore. It seems basically perfect. However, one thing...I would have liked to read more. Your scenic descriptions are quite lovely. I would have liked to see more. Lengthen this essay because you were off to such a wonderful start. Why stop now?
- 15/02/2005
- 19:40:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This ends too abruptly, contains too little information and you are rambling in certain places...jumping from topic to topic too quickly. The topic of this story is quite catchy, though. Just write more about it and you'll get an even higher rating. Guaranteed.
- 15/02/2005
- 19:31:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It is a pity that approximately 6 million Jew had to be killed due to the sheer ignorance of a number of racist and fascist individuals. Not to mention the countless individuals who were widowed, orphaned and rendered homeless. Your essay was quite indepth in relation to your emotions. I would have liked to read more.
- 13/02/2005
- 13:42:35
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
To tell you the truth, I didn't know what to think of Kobe Bryant. The girl and Kobe Bryant are the only ones who know the truth. Therefore, it is not my place to judge anyone.This would be good as an argumentative essay. However, it is a bit too one-sided. You should look at all possibilities from all different perspectives.
- 13/02/2005
- 12:32:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I am of the opinion that if an essay is placed under "Creative Writing", it is supposed to be an expression of someone's personal views. Therefore, I am giving this a good rating. The length of it does not really matter to me because it is an individual's emotions.Excellent work, in my book!!
- 12/02/2005
- 12:57:19
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is good. It provides some inspiration to the other students who are placed in a similar situation. Could have been longer but it was good nonetheless.
- 12/02/2005
- 12:49:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a nice little essay that describes a lot. I don't know about the other readers but I certainly learned a lot from it. My interest was instantly captured by this essay because only a few people actually have the ability to write about religion and the martyrs.
- 12/02/2005
- 09:52:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a fair enough attempt at writing. However, the word "she" and the name "Jane" were used a bit too excessively. The essay was also a bit too short and it seemed like you were more or less, skimming the surface. You also did not clearly state the lessons that Jane learned. Out of a scale of 10, I'd give this about 4 or 5.There is still a large possibility that you can learn from your present mistakes. Keep on trying!
- 12/02/2005
- 09:38:40
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A fair attempt at describing the gift you received. However, this definitely, absolutely should not be placed under "Arts." It seems more like a "Creative Writing" essay to me. There was not enough descriptions of Chayon-Ryu. What I mainly read here were personal emotions. More detail and less opinion is needed if you want to place this under "Arts." Fair enough.
- 11/02/2005
- 13:33:40
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It is not right taking the credit for someone else's essay. That's just a lack of responsibility and honesty.http://www.essaycrawler.com/viewpaper/25009.html
- 11/02/2005
- 13:24:57
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Somehow I figured it was going to have a surprise ending like that. This is good creative writing. I failed to understand certain parts though. The character in your story sounded like she was schizophrenic sometimes, as she was in two places at the same time. lol. Just pullin' your leg!Good attempt!
- 11/02/2005
- 10:47:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is really very good. I'm a Caribbean native myself and I've studied this type of history since I was in elementary school. You missed a few details but all in all, it was a good attempt!
- 11/02/2005
- 04:28:46
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Again Mccadden...you make me want to cry. This is so touching and sad. It just shows that some people, even though you may have known them all your life, turn out to be the total opposite of what you thought they were. Life is full of unkind and unpleasant surprises. Excellent ending as well.
- 10/02/2005
- 12:46:32
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I loved this poem. But it is so sad. You have an excellent way of conveying your emotions to your readers. This poem flows well and really gets the reader thinking. Very good work, in my opinion.
- 10/02/2005
- 12:38:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This was really good....even though it was a bit abrupt. Expansion is needed but that can be easily achieved by simply going into a little more detail. Imperialism was one of the major causes of World Wars I and II. Examples of imperialism include colonialism and Manifest Destiny. I'm just adding my two cents but you covered most of it already.Definitely a thumbs up.
- 10/02/2005
- 10:38:38
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
An excellent, informative and precise piece of writing. The topic of Enlightenment is very complex. However, you summed up the basics and some of the major issues in a succinct essay. Good work!
- 10/02/2005
- 10:21:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I'm an avid animal lover (been the proud owner of turtles, fishes and currently 9 dogs), so I hate to see when animals are neglected. This essay explores all aspects of animals and their sensitivity. Maybe if they were able to talk, they would tell us about all the pain the human race has inflicted upon them.This is a very good essay. It increases public awareness to animal cruelty. Good work!
- 10/02/2005
- 07:34:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good poem. The metaphors that are used are quite excellent. However, even though it is a free verse poem, I do think that it should still flow similarly to a poem that rhymes. Good effort though. I really enjoyed it.
- 07/02/2005
- 12:20:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I've always loved poetry, especially the delicate and beautiful struture of haiku. Besides being one of the most ancient forms of writing, the haiku has always seemed to give me a feeling of serenity and tranquility.I like this analysis. Two thumbs up from me!
- 05/02/2005
- 11:52:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I must admit...this was some vert interesting reading, though it was disturbing and somewhat morbid. What can I say...human curiousity. This is an excellent analysis. It is quite detailed and understandable. Good job!
- 03/02/2005
- 15:40:33
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This topic is quite risque, if you ask me. It takes someone with a lot of bravery an confidence to write something like this. I really applaud you for that.This is a good thesis...interesting as well. It is always god to express yourself and not be afraid to state your opinions!
- 03/02/2005
- 08:32:34
- Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
"To Kill a Mockingbird" is definitely one of my favourite American novels. This is quite an interesting approach you took here to give some insight where the mystrious character Boo Radley is concerned. However, one thing struck me about all of this? Boo Radley was basically mute when Scout finally met him. Would he be able to write something like this? Just my two cents.
- 02/02/2005
- 13:52:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is more like a summary of an essay. It could have had a lot more detail. Too many random, unexplained thoughts. The language and grammar is good though.
- 02/02/2005
- 12:57:22
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This could be defined as the introduction and a small portion of the body of an essay. It should have been three times longer. This is way too short. I cannot see your purpose in stopping...you were off to such a good start.
- 02/02/2005
- 12:51:11
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I also do not believe that women should be called whores or sluts. However, you failed to mention that not every man would have something like that to say to a woman. Everyone has their own character. Also, this should have been placed under "Creative Writing" because you did not look at both sides of the argument. This is way too self-opinionated. There also isn't any proof to justify your opinions/points. Your essay definitely needs reviewing.
- 02/02/2005
- 11:45:44
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I'm a lover of rock music as well. Artistes such as U2, Linkin Park and Nickleback are my favourites.This essay, though it is a bit short, is detailed and interesting. Since your level is College Sophomore, I think it would be even better if it is lengthened. Good effort though. I really enjoyed it.
- 02/02/2005
- 11:35:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I never actually knew about these incidents. I know that Trotsky was supposed to be the next leader but I never knew the incidents that overruled him. This is quite an interesting essay. Quite informative, with the ability to grasp your attention. You merely have to improve your conclusion. It needs to be more fluent and flowing.
- 01/02/2005
- 11:12:56
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay truly displays effort and an understanding of Britain. However, it ends a bit abruptly, when it should, in fact, be more detailed and expansive. A little more work and you'll get there. You were off to an excellent start!
- 01/02/2005
- 11:06:56
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good thing I checked. And to believe I rated one of your other essays as "Good."Plaigarized...http://www.goldenessays.com/free_essays/3/legal/assisted-suicide.shtml
- 31/01/2005
- 14:05:14
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a really good essay. You explained the different acts that were passed during the revolution and the events that also took place. However, you should make reference to the fact that this revolutionary war took place during the Age of Enlightenment. The Americans followed the ideas of many European philosophes. They wanted democracy. They wanted jobs to be based on achievement and not ascription. Widen your horizons a little and your essay would be even more impressive. :)Keep up the great work!!
- 31/01/2005
- 13:58:38
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The information within this essay is quite detailed and informative. However, your grammar definitely needs some work. Some words were placed out of context which made your writing sound a bit awkward. A little work again and you're essay will be much better than most. Good work!!
- 24/01/2005
- 14:20:48
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Shameful shameful plaigarism. Taking credit for someone else's work is a gross sign of dishonesty.
- 21/01/2005
- 08:20:08
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I have not read the novel itself. However, I saw the movie and it was quite entrancing, though disturbing. Your understanding of the novel is quite good...it is obvious.
- 20/01/2005
- 14:16:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your analysis is so indepth that I almost feel as if I have read the novel. The only thing is that you should have placed your points in different paragraphs. I have learned that paragraphs make reading a lot easier. Good though. I liked it!
- 20/01/2005
- 14:12:35
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I've read almost all of your essays and it amazes me how well you handle your writing and language skills. People can learn a lot from you...advertisers as well. :) Good work!
- 20/01/2005
- 14:09:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This reminds me of a report I did last year. The journal entries really add a sort of effect. I do not know how to explain it. It's as if you have been pulled into the history books. Quite good indeed. Keep it up!
- 20/01/2005
- 14:05:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is quite detailed. It's a great help as I am a History student, studying the American Revolution (and I am not American.) Great work! Definitely a good source of research.
- 20/01/2005
- 14:01:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a bit short. However, it does contain very valuable information. The research just needs to be a little more indepth. You could have mentioned that Mendelssohn was the instigator, the leader of the baroque revival. Collect more information and this would be even better!It's pretty good for the 6th grade though. The language is excellent.
- 20/01/2005
- 12:45:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I was disappointed when the poem ended. It's just too beautiful to end so quickly. Whenever you write another poem, probably you should expand it a little. The note you added at the end is quite informative as well. No one should have difficulty analyzing this piece.
- 19/01/2005
- 13:30:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This truly is a lovely piece. Being a lover of poetry myself, I can always appreciate a good poem when I see one. I applaud you. Not many people on this website (and in reality) write poetry or truly appreciate it.
- 19/01/2005
- 13:25:24
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Your use of language and vocabulary in this essay is quite profound. The spelling and the very structure of your sentences is excellent. Good work on that part. However, each paragraph is basically a repetition of the one which precedes it. To make your essay more interesting, you should cite...include evidence to support your points and provide analysis and more explanations. Good job nonetheless. There was definitely a lot of effort.
- 19/01/2005
- 13:19:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Strangely enough, your poem made me think that initially, you were talking about a human being. This is excellent. The poem was so personified that I was totally fooled for a while. Great reading!
- 19/01/2005
- 13:09:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Marriage is a sacred, social institution that is important for the proper socialization of an individual. Yet, so many people today exploit it. Good essay. It was well-detailed and easy to understand. Your analysis and general overview of your personal experience with marriage was great!
- 18/01/2005
- 11:16:14
- Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Good writing. However, I would have liked to read more. You were off to a good start but why didn't you finish? Your use of the first person was a little too frequent. Good though. Would be even better if expanded and completed.
- 15/01/2005
- 11:40:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your writing style is magnificent. I especially enjoyed the last line in the last stanza. Remarkable!
- 15/01/2005
- 11:36:03
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is amazing. I never read anything like this before. I have learned, through experience, that sometimes the best essays are written by someone with a great sense of humour! Good job!
- 15/01/2005
- 11:32:46
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
They are all fantastic. My personal favourite is "Jesus Wept". Its ending is superb. You should continue writing poems. You have a special talent.
- 14/01/2005
- 13:46:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is some good stuff. Just to make the skeptics believe, you should also include some evidence of the psychological differences between the two genders. Like they say...women are from Venus, men are from Mars. Your use of rhetorical questions also helps in persuasiveness.
- 14/01/2005
- 13:38:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I'm of mixed race but part of me is African. I'm not American though. I believe that only if stupid people disappear off the face of the earth, there is an extremely small chance that a black president can be elected in the US. Probably the possibilities will change in the next 100 years...but definitely not now.
- 14/01/2005
- 11:41:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good try but this is way too short. You were off to a good start but a lot of expansion is still needed.
- 14/01/2005
- 11:25:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This would do well as a piece of creative writing which is portrayed as a letter. However, you could have used a more figurative style of writing to convey your message. I can see that you want to express your emotion. However, I can also see that you don't know exactly how to express it in such a way that, you'll make a significant impact on your readers.Needs some improvement but you are getting there.
- 14/01/2005
- 11:21:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Binge drinking is definitely a social concern because it is so prevalent and yet, people choose to ignore it. Wonderful paper! It will surely make people more aware of the problem and more committed to finding a solution.
- 12/01/2005
- 13:12:03
- Score: 15 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
I can see your point and this is a piece of creative writing. However, it was still a bit abrupt. You can write something short but it also has to be to the point. More or less, it has to be succinct.Good though. I enjoyed it. Would have liked to read more.
- 12/01/2005
- 12:19:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I also had a problem while submitting a poem. lol! Don't let it get to you. This is pretty cool. Especially the third and fourth lines. Great reading!
- 12/01/2005
- 12:12:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good example of descriptive writing. It's just a bit to abrupt at the ending. Very good attempt though. Keep working!
- 12/01/2005
- 12:07:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very good writing. I could not stop reading. You clearly explained the concepts of emotional intelligence, which is quite helpful because its use has never been made totally clear to me.
- 10/01/2005
- 12:49:04
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You were off to a very good start. However, for a 3rd year college student you could have written a lot more. This is way too short. Some more detail and your essay will undoubtedly, be excellent.
- 10/01/2005
- 12:33:05
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is very interesting and captivating reading. Your depiction of romanticism and some of the works created during romanticism, is quite good. However, you could have also explain more about reason. There wasn't much evidence of that in the essay. Great work though. It held my attention profoundly!
- 10/01/2005
- 12:28:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I'm am an 18 year old young lady and yes, I agree with your points. This would do well as an argunmentative essay. However, to back up your points, it would be even better if you provided some solid proof. Good!
- 10/01/2005
- 12:22:01
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The atomic bomb (in my opinion) was one of the worst things mankind ever created. It is too destructive and if it falls into the wrong hands, it can be used to wreak large amounts of havok and destruction.This essay could do with some expansion and work but considering your level in school, I'll say that the language used is quite good!
- 09/01/2005
- 11:51:27
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I am currently studying Sociology and your analysis of these three very important perspectives is quite good. Next time I have to write an essay about these theories, I'll definitely cite you. Your work is excellent!
- 09/01/2005
- 11:45:39
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent poem. It really shows you how people of different ages act when they encounter true love. Everytime you repeat the phrase "If I" the point/purpose of the poem is simply driven home again and again.Great work!
- 09/01/2005
- 11:38:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
By far, one of my favourite American writers. I especially love his work called "Acquainted With the Night." The poems reflect the character of the man himself. Robert Frost was a very earthy individual...a man who considered himself to be one with nature.Your analysis is quite good. It adds a lot to my knowledge of Frost.
- 08/01/2005
- 10:40:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I have always believed that poetry is an excellent way to vent your feelings and express yourself. This is so mysterious. You will know what you truly mean. Your readers will keep wondering...that just truly adds to the suspense. Very good work indeed!
- 08/01/2005
- 10:32:53
- Score: 19 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
Without change, there can never be progress.Good essay.
- 07/01/2005
- 13:44:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good story. Very descriptive in many parts. I liked it. Just to make things a little more interesting, you could have added a moral to the story. Good work.
- 07/01/2005
- 12:14:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The reason why Act 3 Scene 3 is of such importance is:As you already know, Shakepeare's plays all consist of 5 acts. Since Act 3 is the middle act, it usually represents the climax of the entire play. Therefore, its importance is profound.This is really excellent work! Literature students can learn a lot from this essay.
- 06/01/2005
- 13:42:32
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This story really held my fascination. Though it was somewhat morbid, I just couldn't stop reading. Made me want to cry too. Good work.
- 04/01/2005
- 14:13:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
To tell you the truth, this would have been more captivating if it wasn't so confusing. All those different names made my eyes cross. Next time, don't use so many characters in one piece of writing.
- 04/01/2005
- 14:07:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I shall agree with penola_digit. I enjoy the second poem more. It talks about the trials some people have to live everyday. I can relate from my years as a teenager. You act like a master of disguise and sometimes it hurts.Great poem!
- 04/01/2005
- 13:29:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is pretty good to an extent. However, unless it is an argumentative essay, it should not be so opinionated. You may think that Zeffereli's 16th century setting was dull but other people may beg to differ. The "old" Elizabethan theatrical seeting appeals to many people, while the modern movie version may seem a bit too fast-paced.Good essay nonetheless. You truly put effort into it.
- 04/01/2005
- 12:54:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is simply excellent. Your creativity, writing skills and insightful way of thinking cannot be surpassed. Even though this essay is rather long, I could not turn my attention away from it. I rarely ever tell someone that their work is perfect but I would certainly make an exception with this!
- 04/01/2005
- 12:45:28
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good enough information. Too many grammatical errors though. That can really "kill" an essay. Work that out and it'll sound much better.
- 02/01/2005
- 14:30:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
http://www.cyberessays.com/Politics/129.htmAt first I thought, "Great essay!" But then I checked it out and I got it at the above URL. Even the works that are cited at the botton are there.
- 01/01/2005
- 13:20:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Obviously plaigarized. You even included the caption for an image in your last sentence.http://heritage.stsci.edu/1999/29/caption.html
- 01/01/2005
- 13:12:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I studied William Wordsworth in school and I know that many parts of your interpretation are a bit "off." Also, your explanations are not detailed enough. The poem contains a lot more important words and phrases. You should read the poem a few times again before attempting any sort of analysis.
- 01/01/2005
- 12:03:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Research is good. Grammar is used out of context a few times, especially in the first paragraph. Very good piece of writing though. You know what you are talking about.
- 31/12/2004
- 16:37:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I thought this essay was too good to be true for the 7th grade.Plaigarized.http://www.essaycity.com/free_essays/00589.txt
- 31/12/2004
- 09:35:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
http://www.megaessays.com/viewpaper/7155.htmlShameful proof of plaigarism.
- 31/12/2004
- 08:04:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay was off to a very good start, though the word "sailor" was mentioned a little excessively. The ending was also a bit abrupt. However, it was interesting in most parts. Tuck it in here and there and it'll all work out.
- 31/12/2004
- 07:39:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
"What is love?" is a very thought-provoking essay. I really like it and it deserves a higher rating. Many people wonder what is love because most times, it just doesn't seem to work for them. Great essay! Makes you think!
- 30/12/2004
- 12:47:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is way too short. You were off to a good start though. Just expand your essay a lot more and you would be surprised at how much attention it would get. It just needs a little work, that's all.
- 30/12/2004
- 12:42:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The first thing I thought when I read this essay was, "Why does it have a rating of only 1?"This is quite good. Very descriptive, interesting and somewhat melancholy. A truly great effort.
- 30/12/2004
- 12:38:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
All in all, this essay is the representation of a good effort. However, there are many grammatical errors that need serious attention. Good try though. I could clearly see your purpose and aim within the essay. Keep trying!
- 30/12/2004
- 12:33:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Jean Rhys is one of my favourite authors and your analysis of her book is quite detailed. However, the conclusion could do with a little improvement. All in all, this is a very informative essay. Good work!
- 29/12/2004
- 12:40:48
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay has a bit of potential. However, there are some grammatical errors. You seriously need to review them. For instance, you mentioned in the first paragraph that those who are striken, start bleeding from all "pores" on their bodies. You should replace that word with "orifices." Just a friendly suggestion.Some improvement and reviewing is needed but you'll get there soon enough!
- 25/12/2004
- 13:06:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is the work of a true poet. You interpreted the word "Lifetime" in your own way and wrote a poem about it. I really like this. It flows well and sounds magnificent.
- 24/12/2004
- 14:09:03
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is pretty intriguing. The milieu within it is placed and the way you wrote your words, really caught my attention. Simply make some grammatical corrections and you're essay will truly be great.
- 24/12/2004
- 13:55:38
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Could use a bit of improvement here and there. All in all, it was an okay essay. It would be even better if you had only finished it. There's definitely some work to be done here.
- 24/12/2004
- 10:12:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is almost surreal. I just love it. It's not deserving of a mere 3 points, so I just HAD to rate it.Excellent work!
- 24/12/2004
- 10:07:42
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is truly an example of very competent writing. From just reading this essay, I could actually feel the emotions. Probably you should increase your use of literary devices. They would make the essay even more interesting. Guaranteed.
- 24/12/2004
- 09:50:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The first thing I thought when I read this beautiful and touching poem was "Awwwwww!" This is very lovely. You really should think about studying poetry professionally, if you don't already. :)
- 23/12/2004
- 13:29:08
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I've never read the book. However, I saw the movie and I can see what you are talking about. Illiteracy is a very sad - should I say - epidemic. So many people in the world suffer from it and yet, it is so difficult to find a cure.Good essay!
- 23/12/2004
- 13:24:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
There were a few, almost unnoticeable errors but I really liked this essay anyway! All you have to do is change the grammar a little, make a few corrections and you'll have the perfect essay. I couldn't stop reading! Very good!
- 23/12/2004
- 09:35:08
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
http://www.alz.org/AboutAD/causes.aspWhile conducting research, you should be able to write essays in your own words. If you look at a resource and write directly from it, it would definitely be known as plaigarism. I suggest that you review your information and write another essay.
- 23/12/2004
- 09:16:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I saw that documentary by Michael Moore that was entitled "Bowling for Columbine." Despite the high number of guns in Canada, its crime rate is much lower than that of the USA. It's definitely strange!However, I think the number of guns in ANY country should be regulated. It shouldn't be a status symbol but rather, a weapon that deserves a large amount of respect and professional handling.
- 23/12/2004
- 09:06:19
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty enlightening essay. Just the way you write shows how insightful you truly are. I like it. Nice and flowing, intelligent and quite thought-provoking.
- 18/12/2004
- 10:10:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I wanted to read more. This is a very good read. Your descriptions are quite good and I couldn't stop reading. I was disappointed when it ended. Great job!
- 18/12/2004
- 07:21:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I'm dead serious...this essay brought tears to my eyes. And I don't cry easily. :) Look what you did! hehe.Great work! Such emotion.
- 17/12/2004
- 13:49:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like this. It's dark and deep. The fluency of this poem in amazing. It succinct and makes you really think. Great work! I couldn't have done better.
- 17/12/2004
- 13:20:30
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Being such a risque topic, many people are afraid to talk about, much less have an opinion of, euthanasia. I'll applaud you for this essay because you elaborated on both sides of the argument.
- 17/12/2004
- 13:03:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Though this is short, it tells you a lot. It's sorrowful, mournful, melancholy. This is some heavy stuff. Good job!
- 17/12/2004
- 12:48:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I can see that you did some research and you placed some effort in this paper. However, it is a bit abrupt and short. You should add a bibliography and extend your work a bit. Could do with a little work but you're definitely getting there!
- 17/12/2004
- 08:41:42
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Really good essay. Beauty exists both on the outside and on the inside. You said that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. That is true...different people see beauty in different things. Some prefer physical beauty and others choose to admire the mentality of an individual.Great work and I also really like the other comment. It can add a lot to your knowledge and hence, to your essay. Keep it up!!
- 16/12/2004
- 11:51:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a really good descriptive essay. I saw a few similies in there. I would have liked to also see some more literary devices like personification and metaphors. Very good work though!!
- 16/12/2004
- 11:43:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It's so sad when a very active, elderly person finally falls victim to senility, dementia, alzheimer's and other conditions. This is a very good essay that can be used to enlighten many people!
- 15/12/2004
- 07:13:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This paper is a bit short and ends abruptly. However, it contains great content. A good effort!
- 13/12/2004
- 10:51:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A well written and descriptive essay about a single mother and her feelings. Too many people ignore the trials women face, simply because they think that it is none of their business. Good!
- 13/12/2004
- 06:06:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good essay. It got a bit confusing every now and then but it was good in most places. Well researched as well. Keep working!
- 13/12/2004
- 05:52:05
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
In some parts of this essay, you are more or less, rambling. It's an argumentative essay, so you should stick to your point/opinion. I suggest you look it over, make changes and lengthen it a bit. With more effort you will get there.
- 12/12/2004
- 12:43:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Next to the financial factors, there are the emotional and psychological factors as well. Every child needs to have both an adult male and female in their lives. Without both, he/she is left with an empty space which is never filled again, in most cases. This essay is excellent in bringing child-rearing more into the view of society. Very good!
- 12/12/2004
- 08:30:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I also strongly believe that children should be more learned in the arts. I play two musical instruments. Therefore, I am speaking from experience. I have learned patience especially. Instead of being taken out of schools, music should be encouraged. Very very good paper. :)
- 12/12/2004
- 08:23:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is simply an extraordinary and fantastic piece. It reflects a large amount of creativity. You touched some very crucial points in the life of an individual. Not many people can write such an enlightening essay. Quite good!
- 12/12/2004
- 08:19:10
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a really good essay. :) Your use of language is outstanding. Most people usually use very basic and "childish" words to write an essay, simply because it is all they know. However, you did not do this and that's excellent. Especially at your level. A very descriptive piece of writing. However, the conclusion could do with just a little tidying. :)
- 10/12/2004
- 03:07:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
As I am studying "The Tempest" in school right now, your essay provided a lot of useful information. Shakespeare is not very easy to study if one does not possess the necessary skills for it. I can see that you definitely know your Shakepeare.
- 09/12/2004
- 10:54:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I studied 'Romeo and Juliet' for approximately 2 years and I never bothered to look at it from such a perspective as this. This essay had to be written by someone with a very great mind, as it is for the 9th grade. With some citing and more details, this essay can be very great!
- 09/12/2004
- 06:57:50
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a very detailed and expanded research paper. A very risque topic that many people are afraid to have an opinion of. Great work!
- 09/12/2004
- 04:59:03
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think that Schizophrenia is such a sad condition and yet, many people either treat it with scant courtesy or make a joke out of it. You talked about many ways in which problems that are associated with this disease can be given a solution. Very good. :)
- 09/12/2004
- 04:50:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The first thing to catch my eye was the topic of your essay. It's not something people really study but you make it seem so simple. This is good...really good. You cited and hence, this is quite detailed. Good!
- 06/12/2004
- 05:28:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good piece of writing. For the twelve grade, its content is very advanced. Quite good indeed. :)However, just to add a bit...in theory, deviance may be caused by either psychological or physiological defects. Cesare Lombroso said that most criminals had deformaties like extra toes, fingers and so forth. Also, deviant acts vary from society to society. Probably you can include all in this is a conclusion. Just try to summarize everything at the end.Pretty good at your level though. Amazing. :)
- 05/12/2004
- 11:07:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
If I had to choose between the two, I would walk away and choose some serious rehabilitation. Pretty good essay. It was detailed, precise and very informative. I believe that alcohol is just as harmful as marijuana. Not only is it addictive as well...it's easier to obtain than the latter.Good effort nonetheless!
- 05/12/2004
- 11:00:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Being a Caribbean (Trinidad) native myself, I totally agree with your thesis. The individuals who are in charge of today's youngsters (parents and teachers) should indeed, strengthen all aspects of primary and secondary socialization.Good essay!
- 05/12/2004
- 07:46:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This made me smile, yet it left me slightly nostalgic. This essay gave me warm fuzzies. :) With a little improvement on the English, it can be wonderful!
- 04/12/2004
- 14:00:16
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an outstanding and thought-provoking essay. The reason why I rated it so favourably is because it is quite introspective for a 12th grade piece of writing! Good job!
- 04/12/2004
- 11:07:32
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a wonderful essay!! Your descriptive and metaphoric abilities are just fantastic. Good job!
- 03/12/2004
- 13:26:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I am guessing that you do not come from an English speaking country. I don't mean that as an insult, mind you. I was just wondering. You need to work on your English. Also, since your essay is on Euthanasia, you should speak more about it. You did not really do that. This is on a personal experience. Maybe it should go under creative writing.Keep trying and you'll get there soon enough.
- 03/12/2004
- 11:42:55
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Oh this was simply great! Your expression, metaphors, emotions. They were all fantastic and well portrayed. Very good job.
- 02/12/2004
- 14:37:05
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is really really good. You certainly provided a lot of information and it is compiled in such a way, that I can clearly understand what you are saying. However, shorten your conclusion a bit. It is a bit too long and detailed when it should be succinct and to-the-point.Really good though!
- 02/12/2004
- 14:19:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This clears up a lot of things. The essay was flowing and you cited. Your introduction was also pretty good. Work on the conclusion a bit. Tuck it in here and there and you would have the perfect piece of writing. :)
- 02/12/2004
- 14:12:00
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was a very good, long and detailed analysis of the two texts. I couldn't help but have a clearer understanding of the novels.Excellent!
- 01/12/2004
- 14:41:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay. I really really do! :) Being Roman Catholic, one reason why I think Jesus assisted poor people is because he was born into a humble existance as well. Imagine being born in a stable...A very very good effort!
- 01/12/2004
- 14:38:15
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty good essay. It makes you want to lend a helping hand to someone...anyone. Life is full of struggles. We just have to learn to deal with them.
- 28/11/2004
- 14:04:49
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an interesting topic, as I have never looked at language from such a perspective before. I agree with your conclusion. Language is not sexist. Society is. A language is created by social beings and therefore, reflects the ways in which we think and react to each other.
- 28/11/2004
- 13:57:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Really really good work for the 12th grade. Wow! I could just imagine the essays you would be writing in college. :)Just one point I want to make...you say that Hamlet was mad but not insane. However....think about it this way. When an individual is very angry, he/she can become temporarily insane because they are just completely consumed by their anger and hatred. The insanity disappears as soon as they claim revenge or when they come to terms with their loss. :)That aside....very very good essay!
- 28/11/2004
- 10:41:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is all very true. Some historians write in ways which reflect their personal views. Whether it may concern race or politics, it reflects the author's opinion. Good essay.
- 26/11/2004
- 10:50:44
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I forgot to mention that maybe you could also start studying Necrophilia, if you haven't already. It's closely related to the other two topics. Keep working!
- 26/11/2004
- 10:37:49
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I had to read it a few times to get an idea of what it meant. Don't worry...that's a good thing. It shows how lateral your mind is. Your story gave me the feeling of being trapped in another dimension. lol! Good!
- 26/11/2004
- 09:56:57
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I always wondered what happened after that SARS outbreak. It just sort of died out on the news. Thank you so much for enlightening me!
- 26/11/2004
- 09:48:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is quite an informative essay that got me hooked on it. An excellent pieceof writing. If this topic is interesting for you, probably you can do some reading on the two serial killers Ed Gein and Albert Fish. They suffered from these disorders.Very good!
- 26/11/2004
- 09:42:42
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I certainly agree with you that Atticus Finch was a hero. He ignored the taunts of "nigger-lover" and defended an oppressed African-American, even though he was never destined to win the case. Good job!
- 21/11/2004
- 13:26:20
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a bit short for a 2nd year college essay. It works really good for a draft though. I guess you should expand it a bit. You started off really good though.
- 21/11/2004
- 13:19:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This was a bit confusing as a lot of strange numerals were added in there. But I do not blame you...computers can be a pain. :P Good though. Once I took my time no analyse, I saw what you wanted to say.
- 20/11/2004
- 12:58:30
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
It's funny that it is called "the freedom of speech", yet it contains no freedom at all! A very decisive and descriptive essay. It really makes you think.
- 20/11/2004
- 12:54:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A very detailed and resourceful essay about one of the earlier philosophers. I've just completed certain aspects of the Enlightenment at school, and your essay adds more information to my mind. Excellent.
- 20/11/2004
- 12:50:48
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay did not fail to grasp my attention. lol! It was very descriptive and its humour kept me smiling at every moment. Very nice! Where I come from (Trinidad) we do have our own version of Neds.
- 19/11/2004
- 08:28:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Personally, I think that the criminal suffers more when he has to face a life sentence. Jail is NOT a nice place.Anyway...that aside...your essay is very well written and fluent. It's very easy to understand and you never stray from the topic. Very good!
- 18/11/2004
- 12:29:36
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is quite explanatory. Therefore, I can fully understand your topic. It truly clears things up!
- 15/11/2004
- 12:57:57
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think that all children have the ability to be exceptionally intelligent. However, there are those who are born with this talent. That talent needs to be nurtured. Therefore, I agree fully with your synopsis. Just a little more detail and you would have the perfect essay.Good! :)
- 15/11/2004
- 12:52:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a very very good effort. However, you should put it into paragraphs. That would make it less confusing. :)Really good, nonetheless.
- 14/11/2004
- 06:42:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent piece of writing for the 13th grade. Your argument is quite strong and convincing. I am also against abortion and I'm sure your words would convince anyone who is for it. :) Keep working!
- 14/11/2004
- 05:38:06
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your usage of sub-titles makes the essay a lot more understandable. This is excellent and quite interesting work.
- 11/11/2004
- 11:22:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
There is no introduction, no conclusion and you did not cite at all. Go into a lot more detail and put a bibliography as well. This is way too short. Analyse your data more and you would be able to come up with more paragraphs and longer paragraphs.
- 11/11/2004
- 11:17:45
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This topic is a very risque one and I applaud you for attempting it. Your conclusion is very legible and flowing. The essay on the whole is also very fluent. Good! You could have mentioned more about the biblical perspective. Probably, you should have drawn reference to the story of Sodom and Gomorra, and your thoughts about it.Excellent essay!
- 10/11/2004
- 09:58:49
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I would have just wrapped my fingers around....This is a very good essay. As you can see, it has the ability to make its readers emotional. I could just feel your anguish. Keep up the good work!(Oh yeah....I understood your little Scottish phrases. lol. Quite well actually.)
- 04/11/2004
- 14:30:02
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Personally, I do not agree with the school's decision. Racism is a part of everyday life and children deserve to know all they can about it. They need to learn that racism is very WRONG. The school's decision is just more proof that people choose to ignore the inevitable.Very good essay! However, I think your argument would have been more concrete if you had just gone into a little more detail. Keep working! :)
- 04/11/2004
- 14:22:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your essay (though it is short) is very much to the point. People usually view Native Americans - Sioux, Comanche, Taino, Kalinago, or whatever the case may be - as being savages. This essay shines some light on the truth!
- 04/11/2004
- 12:45:19
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
You have great insight. Your placing of each theme under a specified heading, made the essay even more understandable. :)
- 31/10/2004
- 13:02:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Could have gone into more detail, expanded your essay a little. Also, you drifted from the relevant topic for a while there.However, this is a good effort. You know what you want to say. Just be a little more analytical. You'll get there soon enough. :) Keep up the good work!
- 31/10/2004
- 12:58:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good attempt to talk about the man himself. However, since "Social Contract" was more or less, his most famous writing, you could have also mentioned "the general will." His works influenced the French Revolution. You could go into more detail about that. Talk more about the Age of Enlightenment.On the other hand, I can see that you did your homework. lol. Your summarizing skills are very good. Better than mine actually. (Don't tell anyone. shhh). Just a little more work and it'll be perfect!! Keep it up!
- 30/10/2004
- 16:15:01
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I can see that this topic was thorough researched. Your interpretation is very insightful. You mentioned that this interpretation is your personal translation. Obviously, you know what this poem is all about. Good! :)
- 26/10/2004
- 14:01:39
- Score: 46 out of 55 people found this comment useful.
This topic has been thoroughly researched and I applaud you for that. You cited a bit and that is good as well. Very interesting. :)
- 21/10/2004
- 15:55:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This reminds me very much of a topic I did in my Sociology class called "Male Marginality." Your essay is excellently done! It provides a tremendous amount of information.
- 09/10/2004
- 14:32:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A good enough try. It is obvious that you put some effort into writing this essay. However, you could improve on the ending a little. It is a bit abrupt. Keep working! :)
- 09/10/2004
- 14:29:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay brightened quite a few horizons. It's very informative (a bit risque) and quite interesting. All these qualities make up a good piece of writing. :) Keep up the good work.
- 09/10/2004
- 14:21:50
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Dark, mystical, creative, eerie. Just a few words to describe the feelings created by just reading this essay. Excellent. Succinct and wonderful!
- 17/09/2004
- 16:19:55
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Sent chills down my spine. This is very well-written. You definitely know how to write an essay that would capture the attention of all your readers!
- 17/09/2004
- 16:16:26
- Score: 12 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
Really cool essay. I've got 9 dogs. In my entire lifetime, I've had about 20 dogs. Hurts everytime when one dies.
- 14/09/2004
- 18:59:08
- Score: 14 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
I love the little twist within this essay. It just goes to show that it doesn't take much for someone to feel immense hatred for what may be an essential part of themself.
- 10/09/2004
- 18:10:03
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You're really good at describing the anguish a person feels as they are about to commit suicide. Many people in today's society choose not to pay attention to this problem. Many people do not realize that their fellow men may be hurting inside.Thumbs up!
- 10/09/2004
- 18:07:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I am a person who absolutely LOVES and appreciates good poetry. And this is definitely one very cool poem. Keep up the good work!
- 10/09/2004
- 18:02:57
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Your writing style was full of sorrow and yet. almost poetic. This essay, though it is short, really held my attention from beginning to end. I applaud you!
- 10/09/2004
- 17:59:44
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You state everything so bluntly and to the point. I like that! You make the essay fairly short and easy to understand. Many people cannot do that because they have a habit of over-explaining a point.VERY GOOD JOB! :)
- 08/09/2004
- 17:07:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Informationen die ich vorher nicht gewußt habe. Ein sehr langes aber interessant Stück.
- 05/06/2004
- 08:55:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
There was a slight tinge of bias. You should argue both sides. However, this essay was very interesting and you provided a lot of information. You also cited a lot. Very good!
- 02/06/2004
- 05:50:16
- Score: 15 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
You really spoke about your feelings regarding censorship. This is truly creative and really good for the 10th grade. Thumbs up!
- 01/06/2004
- 07:54:23
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Quite good. It could've been even better if you had lengthened it. Your grammar is excellent and there is a lot of imformation. Keep it up!
- 01/06/2004
- 07:50:51
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay is pretty good. I like your writing style and the way you execute your points in such a way that they are easy to understand. Excellent word flow!
- 27/05/2004
- 18:21:22
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Ihre Schopfungen sind immer sehr interessant und wunderbar. Ich kenne jetzt viel mehr auf dem Thema Emotionale Intelligenz.
- 27/05/2004
- 15:46:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I really love this essay. The play "Romeo and Juliet" has always held my interest since I studied it a few years ago in detail. Your analysis shows an indepth amount of knowledge. Very good."A pair of star-cross lover take their life;Whose misadventured piteous overthrowsDoth with their death bury their parents' strife."This also shows that only the death of their offspring would force the feuding families to let bygones be bygones. It is the element of consequence.Yours was a very good attempt. ^_^
- 27/05/2004
- 14:38:25
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It is truly amazing and puzzling how Adolf Hitler hated Jews so much, when it was rumoured that he was part Jew himself. A wonderfully informative essay.
- 27/05/2004
- 13:08:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Quite interesting. I can use some of that info for my history class. Good!
- 27/05/2004
- 12:58:27
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
My grandfather committed suicide and as a result,died on my 4th birthday. I cannot remember him that well but it's weird to know that something like that hit so close to home. Good essay!
- 27/05/2004
- 09:01:20
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Every time a pop-up shows up on my screen, I feel like taking a hammer and smashing the entire thing.lol. Anyway...this is the first time someone has actually taken the time to write about their dissatisfaction.Thanks!
- 27/05/2004
- 08:54:12
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I must admit,my mind was in the gutter for a while there.lol. Very good. You kept the reader guessing for quite a while. There was a lot of suspense and drama as well.
- 27/05/2004
- 08:40:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Dies ist sehr interessant. Vielen Dank fur lhre guten Beschreibungen.
- 27/05/2004
- 08:30:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Being a multi-racial person, I can greatly appreciate this summary and the views you expressed. Good job.
- 27/05/2004
- 08:19:28
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a fantastic piece of descriptive writing. I enjoyed it greatly.
- 27/05/2004
- 08:14:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well...I'm not American but my little island in the Caribbean is where I always want to be. I am always grateful.Good job!
- 26/05/2004
- 19:55:49
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
That was absolutely,positively wonderful! A very amusing piece that held my attention till the end. I especially love your little comparison of the hygienist to a pit bull.lol. I don't know about anyone else but I certainly love it.
- 26/05/2004
- 19:52:00
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The only word I can think of is wow. That was a truly sad and heart-wrenching essay. Imagine people would do that to children. It is not a problem merely in Egypt but all over the world as well. Thank you so much for sharing.
- 26/05/2004
- 19:47:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Wow...it really makes you think. While reading this essay I could help but wonder if any of my close relatives or friends are suffering from this condition. Insightful.
- 26/05/2004
- 19:40:25
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This is a very informative and interesting essay. Many elements of sexual dysfunction and their causes were explained, precisely and fluency. There was no difficulty in understanding your objective.
- 26/05/2004
- 18:48:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I have felt all these symptoms many times in my life. I can truly relate to this story.
- 26/05/2004
- 18:46:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I learned about the majority of this stuff in my Human and Social Biology class. Very informative and I can see that you have done your homework!
- 26/05/2004
- 18:43:41
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Strange...it kinda reminds me of Marxist and Conflict perspectives of Sociology. I like this essay...good work!
- 26/05/2004
- 18:41:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very well-researched essay and wonderful use of grammar for the 10th grade level. Excellent flow. Good job.
- 26/05/2004
- 06:39:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
To tell you the truth, I never like this book...thought it was pretty boring. However, your analysis of one of its aspects, makes it seem so much more interesting. You have certainly opened my eyes.
- 26/05/2004
- 06:33:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
However, I agree with the other comment. You should include the title "Othello" somewhere. Good nonetheless. :)
- 25/05/2004
- 19:15:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
My favourite author by far. I've read many of his books, short stories and seen a few of his movies. Now I know about the man himself.
- 25/05/2004
- 19:03:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't really know much about the indigenous people of North America.I have only studied native Caribbean peoples.So you taught me something. Thank you.
- 25/05/2004
- 16:17:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I've been on this website for a while now and I can safely say that this is the best-researched essay I've ever read. Excellent job!
- 25/05/2004
- 16:11:40
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This was very very interesting. I've never heard about this condition before. You taught me something new!
- 25/05/2004
- 16:04:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay. Good use of imagery and literary devices.
- 25/05/2004
- 15:58:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay. I thoroughly enjoyed it,since Macbeth has always been one of my favourite plays. However, I believe that no one is totally innocent,nor totally evil. We are all a little of both.The only thing is that each characteristic manifests itself in different ways according to the individual. Good job. :)
- 25/05/2004
- 08:07:02
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A very fluent and flowing essay. I can see that you used many sources in order to gather your information. The majority of my best friends are males and I am glad to know that they would protect me rather than assault me. Good job.
- 25/05/2004
- 07:54:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really agree with you. For someone who is not from an English speaking country, your English is all right. Just a little more practice and you'll get there. A very good and creative piece of writing. :) Keep up the good work.
- 25/05/2004
- 07:47:49
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay. You provided a lot of information. One can learn quite a lot about Australia from just reading this essay.
- 23/05/2004
- 13:01:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very very interesting. You can also mention that Adolf Hitler murdered some Jews by garrotting. The information you provided was very extensive and quite attention-gripping.
- 23/05/2004
- 11:32:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I learned a lot from this essay. I've never heard about those women before. Thank you for teaching me something. Besides...I've never been good at Math.lol
- 20/05/2004
- 07:29:13
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A superior argument. Though many people are not in favor of the death penalty, you put up a good battle with superb illustrations. I applaud you for your courage in selecting such a controversial topic. Very good undeniably.
- 19/05/2004
- 18:17:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I have always had an affiliation with nature. As a result, I can greatly appreciate this narrative and the experience you had. A very eloquent and appealing essay.
- 19/05/2004
- 18:03:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I studied "Macbeth" when was about 13 years old and it was a very interesting tragedy. Your analysis of the main characters is good. I can see that you understand the text. If you lengthen it a bit,it'll be even more perfect.
- 19/05/2004
- 16:45:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay. Your descriptions are very imaginative and unique. I especially enjoyed the last sentence. Most of my fellow classmates can't create descriptive phrases like that. Thumbs up.
- 19/05/2004
- 12:23:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A good attempt. I can see that you did your research and I commend you for that. You just need to fix the sentence structure a little. Don't start your sentences with "because". I makes the entire sentence imcomplete. A good effort. ^_~
- 19/05/2004
- 12:12:38
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I also believe that if an individual's illness is uncurable,fatal and/or intermittent,and they are of sound mind,they should be able to make the choice of death by euthanasia. A very insightful essay.
- 19/05/2004
- 10:13:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I'm glad that you learned to love Spanish culture. 45% of my race is Venezuelan and I love speaking the Spanish language. Good reflective essay.
- 18/05/2004
- 11:38:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Personally I am a fan of the social sciences, where you can objectively observe phenomena and make your own theories. Social sciences are more personal. Natural Sciences are a little too statistical for my liking. I really enjoyed your essay.
- 18/05/2004
- 10:02:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay really caught my attention because those diseases have always been curiosities to me. I do not know anyone who is anorexic or bulimic but I still think that the diseases are very sad. Good research!
- 18/05/2004
- 09:49:40
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
What song?I don't know any song that sounds like this. If there is a song,it was unintended. All my works are original and plagarism definitely isn't my thing. I do not appreciate your comment as it greatly insults what I put out my mind to create.
- 18/05/2004
- 07:19:33
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
I've always been a lover of wildlife and this essay adds a bit to the knowledge I already possess. A very good essay. Succinct.
- 17/05/2004
- 17:18:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very insightful essay. I read it twice and yet,I could find no errors. Well researched and quite informative.
- 17/05/2004
- 16:18:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I have always liked sonnets.They faascinate me...only 14 lines and yet,they have the ability to be so complex. Thank you for this analysis.
- 17/05/2004
- 15:04:48
- Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
This is a very witty and attention-grabbing essay. Your sentence configuration and the way you explained different factors are remarkable. Thumbs up from me.
- 17/05/2004
- 14:09:07
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Excuse me while I go wash my face with cold water.lol Just kidding. A very interesting piece.Can be shortened just a little to avoid confusion.Good effort nonetheless.Keep it up!
- 17/05/2004
- 12:12:03
- Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
Who are you and what have you done with normal year 9 kids? lol It's already a very good essay indeed. However,to make it even more perfect,you could lengthen it and maybe go into mor detail. Very good job!
- 17/05/2004
- 08:26:50
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
You never cease to amaze me. Only twelve years old and yet, your wisdom exceeds your age. A very,very good essay. Analysis,fluency and grammar.All perfect.
- 16/05/2004
- 16:07:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You have a lovely way of placing your writing in the form of a conversation or monologue. Very interesting. I have never really read something like that before. Good job.
- 16/05/2004
- 15:55:33
- Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
It all depends on what you call "Child Abuse". Over here in the Caribbean,parents beat their children when they are naughty.However, these children don't grow up to be deviant.They grow to be responsible,affectionate adults. But there are some parents who do go overboard and small children often die from child abuse.Thank you for your essay.
- 15/05/2004
- 17:33:07
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Where I come from,school kids have to wear uniforms. In both public and private schools. I must say...it cuts down on the expense of having to buy different clothes all the time. I agree with your perspective.
- 15/05/2004
- 16:54:18
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Emile Durkheim has always been the center of various sociological studies in my sociology class at school."The first and most fundamental rule is: Consider social facts as things." (Durkheim,1938, first published 1895)I never knew that his study of suicide was negligent in some ways.Thank you for your explanation.
- 15/05/2004
- 13:43:35
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
A truly amazing poem. I had to read it twice in order to fully appreciate its purpose. That's life for ya. Thank you for sharing this enlightening piece.
- 15/05/2004
- 13:37:05
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your poem is both morbid and very interesting. Great use of literary devices.Metaphors,similies. Good job.
- 15/05/2004
- 13:27:33
- Score: 16 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
I enjoy writing stories myself and your story was very exciting. I could not stop reading. Keep up the good work. Great explanations and images were also provided.
- 15/05/2004
- 10:37:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I can almost see the main point of your essay...but some other people may not. You need to be a little more specific. But it was a good attempt anyway.
- 15/05/2004
- 10:13:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
As a young woman growing up in a malestream world, I can relate to this story. The women of the two World Wars were just as brave as the men and they deserve appreciation for that. Thanks!
- 15/05/2004
- 10:00:43
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
That's one very cool essay. It's very descriptive and so interesting that I just want to eat it up.hehe. Anyway....a very good job. Should've been a little longer though. That would have made it even more cool than it already is. Good job!
- 14/05/2004
- 19:58:03
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Thanks for the comments. The story of Spring Heeled Jack has always fascinated me.This was just a way for me to share that fascination with others. Oh yeah,DragonBlade....I saw that cartoon too.lol We get a lot of tv shows and cartoons down here in the Caribbean. :)
- 14/05/2004
- 06:26:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was very fluent,very interesting and very understandable. It taught me many things. Not only about the status of women in those days but of fine art and history. Thank you.
- 13/05/2004
- 05:16:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good essay. Concepts are well-explained and many examples were provided. You strayed from the topic once or twice....but your essay was still understood. :)
- 12/05/2004
- 18:59:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It doesn't really deal with the aspect of Bob Marley's music. However, it does give the reader a lot of insight into his religious background and the background of Jamaica. Very good attempt.
- 11/05/2004
- 17:16:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Lots of info provided,good structure and lots of fluency. Excellent.
- 11/05/2004
- 16:44:00
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Irony...one of the most puzzling things of human nature.Great essay and quite imaginative.
- 11/05/2004
- 09:39:30
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Normally an argumentative essay and a critical essay looks at both sides of the story. This essay shows a large amount of bias. You also need to improve your structural skills a bit.
- 11/05/2004
- 09:07:15
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like that essay.I've only just started to learn a little about Germany.This essay added a bit to the knowledge I already possess.Vielen Dank. :)
- 11/05/2004
- 08:57:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a sort of 'Oh' and 'Ah' essay. Very educational and interesting. I could not stop reading. A person can learn a lot from this piece. Thumbs up from me.
- 11/05/2004
- 08:25:43
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Well done. It assisted me with a bit of sociology I was trying to study. You could also mention the fact that questionnaires are used to conduct quantitative research.It is a methodology that is usually used my Positivists like Auguste Comte.Qualitative employs the use of participant observation and is usually used by Symbolic Interactionists like Max Weber.
- 11/05/2004
- 08:10:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A good essay. It was put together well and is very concise. Probably, you can lengthen it a bit by getting a little information about the 17th century English philosopher, Thomas Hobbes. Hobbes claimed that human beings are rational,self-interested and calculating.Very good effort!
- 10/05/2004
- 12:11:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very,very cool.Your story makes me more aware of the trials people face each day.Some people choose to look at the outside and forget about the inside.But the attitude that is within a person is what truly counts. A lovely story about one of the main factors of life.
- 10/05/2004
- 09:48:45
- Score: 22 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
It's a good essay...very informative and it is not difficult to see that you put a lot of effort and time into it. However,you need to make one tiny correction.The name of the disease is Down's Syndrome and was named after John Langdon Haydon Down who first described the condition in the year 1866.
- 09/05/2004
- 10:58:07
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you put your words together.Probably that is why your essay was short. Your word usage made sure that you got your point across in a few phrases.Good job.
- 08/05/2004
- 19:28:26
- Score: 16 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
The words flow well,the story is interesting,I could not stop reading.The introduction of this short story was full of imagery.Very good,indeed.
- 08/05/2004
- 13:27:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I heard about giant spider crabs from other sources before,but this is the best source I've ever come across. Lots of info is provided to the reader.Nice. :)
- 08/05/2004
- 12:52:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Due to the history of the world and the mentality of the past,SOME men still choose to exploit women. A Feminist describes the world as "malestream" because men hold higher positions. However, this is changing rapidly as more women are going out to the workplace. This may be due to a higher availability of education to women. Some women may be suppressed still but the situation WILL be entirely different in the years to come.Thank you for that essay.The others' comments are very good as well.
- 08/05/2004
- 11:34:51
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I can just say Wow! This essay deals with every aspect of the assassination-analysis,description,all perspectives.Good essay flow and the techniques that are used are simply awesome.No wonder you got 97%. I can learn from you. Keep up the good work!
- 07/05/2004
- 09:53:03
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Amazing.I just wanted to keep reading.Very soulful.Keep up the good work.
- 07/05/2004
- 09:37:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Quite interesting. Thought-provoking...it makes you think. Short but succinct.
- 06/05/2004
- 19:45:23
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I love that essay. You speak from experience....one of the best things that help you along in this world.Cool.
- 05/05/2004
- 20:19:09
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
This story expressed the pain and helplessness a woman feel after she is raped.People should be more aware of such an issue.Maybe then women who have been raped will be able to go on with their lives and try to push all the tragedy away.
- 02/05/2004
- 15:42:05
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I often heard that in the past,people merely threw the bodies of the miners upon their doorsteps.It was up to the wife who was most times,short of money,to bury him.That was before the onset of women's rights.Wonderful,excellent essay!
- 30/04/2004
- 09:59:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well done for the 9th grade. Short but to the point and good imagery is displayed.
- 17/04/2004
- 18:53:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very insightful. :) Very nice,indeed.
- 17/04/2004
- 17:19:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I am also Trinidadian and this essay makes me love my country and its talent even more.Thanks!
- 17/04/2004
- 16:47:46
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A little short but helpful nonetheless! :)
- 16/04/2004
- 17:12:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Informative! Imagine a company falsifying bank accounts for a 15 year period. Whoa...
- 16/04/2004
- 07:48:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Quite informative and educational.I like this essay because it taught me many things that I was not previously aware of.
- 14/04/2004
- 18:38:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay.I was a child whose parents went through a divorce and I wish my parents had done some of those things.Good advice. :)
- 14/04/2004
- 15:32:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
That was rather fascinating.Even though it was short,it was also to the point.I can see that great insight was placed within this piece.It sounds better when it is short like this.If it had been longer, it would have probably lost its true purpose.Keep up the good work!
- 14/04/2004
- 13:41:11
- Score: 22 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
This essay is good for the 9th grade level.It's fluent and you do not seem to be babbling.Keep at it and you'll be writing excellent,flawless essays in no time at all.This play has always been one of my favourite Shakepeareans,since my last name is Montague.hehe.
- 13/04/2004
- 17:30:49
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really like that essay. It goes deeply into the poet's emotions.Not everyone has insight so good. :) Keep it up!
- 13/04/2004
- 17:21:49
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.