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Essay List
The Right to Download Music -persuasive essay to convince it's okay to download music, includes lots of statistics
- 1008 words (4 pages)
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The Practicality of Using Quotas
- 622 words (2 pages)
- 22
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10 Journal Entries in French, descriptions of a trip to France, written in French level 3
- 2334 words (9 pages)
- 93
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Good, but a few suggestions...
there are a lot of good points in this essay but it could be a lot stronger if it didnt have so many \"to be\" verbs and passive voice. it would also be a lot stronger if written in third person (ie: no us, we)- 08/03/2004
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