good essay with attention to detail, very long though 7000+ words is a long paper
- 25/11/2003
- 04:23:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is an excellent paper all around, nice writing pattern as well as bibliography
- 25/11/2003
- 04:21:44
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
nice works cited page, very organized paper
- 25/11/2003
- 04:20:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
true in the real world yet in school personal experience doesnt seem to get you anywhere
- 25/11/2003
- 04:19:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
good, informs reader about asbestos and its harmfullness
- 25/11/2003
- 04:15:17
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
good job taking a diffrent standpoint, very creative, sophisticated writing
- 25/11/2003
- 04:13:36
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
poor, personal stories will not help many others, but good points
- 25/11/2003
- 04:12:27
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
excellent, this is a great paper, clear and to the point
- 25/11/2003
- 04:11:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
wordy, but it does cover many details
- 25/11/2003
- 04:09:55
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
is this some joke, who can use someone elses experiences. not an essay
- 25/11/2003
- 04:08:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
many facts and dates, a fine piece of writing
- 25/11/2003
- 04:07:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
well writeen, cocise and to the point
- 25/11/2003
- 04:06:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
the spacing is odd but the ideas are good, all a user would have to do is re arrange the patterns
- 24/11/2003
- 13:02:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
good essay, but on such a worn out topic, does convince rather well, magnificent examples
- 24/11/2003
- 13:00:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
excelent content, i learned alot from this essay, i like the writing style
- 24/11/2003
- 12:58:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay has alot of fact, it will most likley be of use to someone in a health class,....good bibligraphy
- 24/11/2003
- 12:55:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
well written paper, could be very useful to someone with a philisophy paper
- 24/11/2003
- 09:14:03
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this doesnt seem like an essay as much as personal experiences
- 24/11/2003
- 09:12:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.