'Teens are viloent, cold and unremorseful because their families neiborhoods and society
are violent. Teens care so little about others because so little care has been shown them
(MacDonald 1A).' Many children today in society contain hate and bitterness, and
because of this do they become a problem. Many argue that children become what they
become because they make their own bed for themselves in life. I am in total
disagreement with this theory. I stand by the fact that children become what they become
according to their upbringing and the environment they were raised in. Parents
determine the life a child will lead. Parents are the most important factor in a child's life.
How they treat and act to their children will determine how they become morally and
sociably to society. Divorce, lack of love, lack of discipline, and lack of attention are all
factors that support that parents determine how a child becomes.
Parents are role
models, and raising their children together, with love, with discipline, and with lots of
attention is not only their job, but their responsibility as parents. Parents determine how
their children become.
As the years go by, we see a higher and higher divorce rate. As this rate goes up,
so does the crime rate. Couples today have forgotten the word commitment. As a result
of this, the children suffer. It is hard to grow up with separated parents. Most children
become bitter or angry as they grow because of their divorced parents. In some cases the
parents fight or argue which can affect a child, and may adapt the child to be more
aggressive. Also, when raising a child in a divorced atmosphere, what kind of lesson is
he/she learning? They will learn that a commitment is not a serious thing. That...
Some question!
I find some words in your writing so strange and I can not look up them in my dictionary ( maybe my dictionary is not good enough).
But some words like that:
Neglectence -- do you mean "neglectfulness"??
or dominet -- do you mean "dominate"???
And at last, I think your points are so strong and good, but you wrote too long in each paragraph, and in someway, I find many the same idea or the same sentences in the different paragraphs.
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